Blue Hole

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Within form, a blue hole ethereal Connects us with Gods divine vibration Enigmatic throat chakra enables In-pouring of grace by resonation Only the pure of heart, may pierce the veil For the orifice is small and narrow Feral elements cannot therein sail Nor fearful hearts, worried about morrow Blue hole mysterious, rainbow colour Seemingly setting tone for the twilight Hues red, orange, yellow and green lower Blue transitions to violet, clear light To go through the blue hole, we must dissolve Surrendering ego, ready to die Thus twice born, we live on and soul evolves As consciousness reaches for yonder sky 12-May-2021 Blue hole poetry contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/6/2021 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write, only the good will enter the blue hole that eagerly waits for the pure of soul… Belle

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/6/2021 7:46:00 PM

Thanks Belle! Google Vishuddha chakra to learn more :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/5/2021 10:41:00 PM

Great entry, US, congratulations on your win. I try to live my the word of the Lord. He has never turn lose of my line. <3

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/5/2021 11:15:00 PM

As Buddha said ‘all paths have their own validity, getting to the roots’

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/5/2021 7:35:00 AM

Very Philosophical. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/5/2021 10:26:00 PM

Hi Chris! Not philosophical but physiological. Unlike mental concepts, the energy path offers a lucid, crystal clear, felt experience of the bliss energy, within.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/13/2021 5:04:00 AM

Jesus is my anchor so I don't fall for anything that isn't of Him! God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/13/2021 6:36:00 AM

All is within us, dear Regina! Reworded, God is within us and we are within Him.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/12/2021 11:27:00 AM

We must evolve to a point of no resentment no anger no regret, to sail away into the plane of ascended Masters. That is not an easy fiat. Going through that blue, without further Adieu, lets try :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/12/2021 6:50:00 PM

Easy for an innocent child, difficult, if not impossible for the ego. The Bible says, “ It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle than for someone who is rich to enter the kingdom of God."