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Blue Cheese and Old Pickles

Quince shaped houses landscape Julienned Street where citric groans once molded a blue cheese night. In one home lives reclusive Graham and his wife, Coco, two dilled, old pickles nervously living on the lamb. Busted selling urine for addiction pee tests, they agreed to flee from a legal barbeque. Combining their bran, they landed on Julienned. They peppered with fright when a repair man fell down, done, dead and fried on their hall floor. They freaked, but managed to fully bake a plan. Loud growls and spiced moans got them to the cellar where they fillet him to fit in seams of aged beams.

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Date: 4/3/2025 1:08:00 PM
Scary and macabre, Cay Cay! Would make a good horror movie! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/3/2025 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/1/2025 7:10:00 PM
Cool poem, it could be a new genre, fillet noir!
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Date: 4/1/2025 5:40:00 PM
Whether fleeting or permanent, this poem serves as a constant reminder that everything we experience in this world has the potential to teach us something about who we are. Great feelings, including loneliness and heartache, swirl throughout this poetry. Congrats on your win, Cay Cay
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Date: 3/19/2025 2:37:00 PM
I am amazed! How clever this is and engaging CayCay! You certainly have a gift that you apply with unique skill! Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 3/19/2025 1:54:00 AM
This is so unique, CayCay:) well done:)
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Date: 3/18/2025 10:50:00 PM
Well that was indeed metaphorical. It amazes me how you come up with something like this. I loved the play on words related to baking. Good luck for a win, dear friend.
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