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Blue bird, you perch on trees, by the forest's far rim. Dressed in silk robes of sapphire hues, with tapering tail and a bill so sleek, singing in melodious strains, your sweet notes ringing loud. How I love you, Blue bird. July. 18. 2022 ~ Placed First~ Rictameter Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/9/2022 11:21:00 AM

Valsa, your first and last lines blend beautifully with your poem. A most enjoyable read. Congratulations on your deserving first placement. I am saving this gem to my Faves. I love it! Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2022 6:53:00 AM

Sweet ending..poem filled with lovely imagery ~ Kim

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/5/2022 2:24:00 PM

You belong in the blue, blue sky, blue bird so adorable. Congratulations on your Win, Valsa! Hugs, Anaya

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/5/2022 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/5/2022 5:40:00 AM

Back with congrats Valsa! Linda

Valsa George
Date: 8/5/2022 6:58:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2022 7:00:00 PM

I love this sweet one you did. Congrats to you, Valsa.

Valsa George
Date: 8/5/2022 1:57:00 AM

Dear Andrea, much gratitude to you !

Bill Baker

Date: 7/21/2022 2:28:00 PM

Lovely Rictameter, Valsa. Beautiful picture accompanying your great imagery. Have a blessed day! Bill

Valsa George
Date: 8/5/2022 1:56:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear bill for your lovely comment ! Love and blessings !

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/21/2022 2:06:00 PM

A sweet tribute to the lovely blue bird. Nice imagery! Linda

Valsa George
Date: 8/5/2022 1:55:00 AM

Thanks a lot Linda ! I too love my blue bird

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/19/2022 4:04:00 PM

Beautifully written. I enjoyed this :)

Valsa George
Date: 7/20/2022 5:13:00 AM

Thanks a lot Heidi

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2022 1:46:00 PM

this is sweet and pretty. I am really enjoying the rictameters I'm seeing.

Valsa George
Date: 7/20/2022 5:13:00 AM

Thank you dear Andrea ! Rictameter poems appeal to us by their very format !

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/19/2022 12:13:00 PM

So lovely and descriptive, Valsa! Janice

Valsa George
Date: 7/20/2022 5:11:00 AM

Thanks a lot Janice....

Michael Tor

Date: 7/18/2022 8:10:00 PM

This is a favorite for me Valsa. Loved everything about it. God bless you for your effort in creating and sharing this Piece of Poetry with us...

Valsa George
Date: 7/18/2022 11:02:00 PM

I am so delighted....Thanks a lot dear Michael !

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/18/2022 6:23:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, but not the barbed wire! Aloha!

Valsa George
Date: 8/5/2022 1:54:00 AM

Sorry to hear of your brother's mishap, Rico

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/19/2022 6:23:00 PM

i acquired considerable close-up experience with barbed wire; my brother almost lost an eye to it. Aloha!

Valsa George
Date: 7/18/2022 10:57:00 PM

I know.... ! She should have been placed on a bushy tree ....! You have great observation Rico...

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/18/2022 9:15:00 AM

Valsa, I just adored the way you described your bluebird using this amazing Rictameter form. You are able to convey the visual with a great deal of specificity while maintaining brevity. Best for a win

Valsa George
Date: 7/18/2022 11:00:00 PM

I always relish your highly encouraging comments dear poet friend !