Blowout

The image could not be more clear:
the blowout from a diaper,
recoiling from my precious child
as though she were a viper.
Olfactory assault enough
to bring you to your knees,
the onesie soiled, arms raised, she cries
for you to help her, please.
Shaking, sweating, retching and forlorn,
gagging in the sink, “Who gave our daughter corn?”

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For the “Form I - Imagism - New Poem” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Written on 03/07/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gorelick Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 6:10 PM
Poetry poop...LOL...Robert
Logan Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:50 PM
Some things can never be forgotten…the stench, the sight, the crying
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 3:29 PM
LOL!
Baker Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 2:59 PM
Having been there and done that, your imagery was spot on, Jeff. That can really be a challenge. Good luck in the contest. Bill
Kyser Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 3:02 PM
My wife and I were laughing as I was reading this; it was over 30 years ago, and we can still visualize it! :-)
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