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Blowout

The image could not be more clear: the blowout from a diaper, recoiling from my precious child as though she were a viper. Olfactory assault enough to bring you to your knees, the onesie soiled, arms raised, she cries for you to help her, please. Shaking, sweating, retching and forlorn, gagging in the sink, “Who gave our daughter corn?” —————
For the “Form I - Imagism - New Poem” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Written on 03/07/2022

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Date: 3/7/2022 6:10:00 PM
Poetry poop...LOL...Robert
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Date: 3/7/2022 4:50:00 PM
Some things can never be forgotten…the stench, the sight, the crying
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Date: 3/7/2022 3:29:00 PM
LOL!
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Date: 3/7/2022 2:59:00 PM
Having been there and done that, your imagery was spot on, Jeff. That can really be a challenge. Good luck in the contest. Bill
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/7/2022 3:02:00 PM
My wife and I were laughing as I was reading this; it was over 30 years ago, and we can still visualize it! :-)

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