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Blowing in the Wind

Wisps of recollections waft through my mind like spores on soft white memories’ threads - vague remnants of May's sun-gold heads. I glimpse but cannot hold them. How foolish the girl who sent them blowing in the wind - wishing her springtime soon would end! 8/24/17

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Date: 11/26/2017 11:32:00 AM
I love the thoughtfulness of this, comparing thoughts like a dandelion's seeds .. and that slight ambiguity which makes one wonder if that little girl was yourself. Soup Mail
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craig cornish
Date: 11/26/2017 2:40:00 PM
Sorry AD--sent it again
Date: 10/2/2017 9:03:00 PM
Succinct, elegant expression of the fleeting passage of time, wished for but now lamented. Well written! Andrea.
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Date: 9/28/2017 4:46:00 PM
I absolutely LOVE this!!!
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on one of your best Andrea! A very deserving first place! : )
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:12:00 AM
Coming back with congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/19/2017 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea , love the shape and the verse is beautiful Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/19/2017 10:41:00 AM
Back for congrats on your top win!!
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 9/19/2017 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea! xxxooo
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:36:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your top win!
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:18:00 AM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write . I LOVE it!
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Date: 9/19/2017 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Andrea :)
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:55:00 AM
lovely write - I see by Connie's comment that it's Poem of the Day (very well deserved)
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Date: 9/1/2017 10:44:00 PM
This poem is so lovely Andrea. It is no wonder it has been honored for POTD! Congratulations my friend! : )
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Date: 8/28/2017 10:09:00 PM
Very strong diction at the beginning. Couldn't have picked better words myself for the first 3 lines!
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Date: 8/26/2017 11:13:00 PM
What a wonderful Etheree, so many forms that I can see you excel in, and what beautiful lines. A very deserving POTD, Congratulations Andrea, and good luck in the competition...Maria
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Date: 8/26/2017 9:55:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 8/26/2017 8:21:00 PM
P.S. Congrats on getting POTD!
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Date: 8/26/2017 8:16:00 PM
Hi Andrea...to my mind, the "foolish girl" has wished "her springtime (youth)" would end because she wants so desperately to grow up but now that she's old(er) she remembers back when she was so young, living in the sunlight of her youth. (Just an interpretation) It's a lovely poem no matter what the meaning is.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/27/2017 2:01:00 AM
you are very astute!!
Date: 8/26/2017 7:07:00 PM
The shape formed by your poems progressively shortening lines is typical of one of your countrys ripping "Twisters", Andrea...not by chance I presume? My warmest regards! :) john
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:18:00 PM
Quite and "ethereal" write here Andrea. Every time I read it I feel subtle shifts in the wind.
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Date: 8/26/2017 2:44:00 PM
love this clever write
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Date: 8/26/2017 12:18:00 PM
- Returning to congrats you, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2017 12:08:00 PM
Wonderful Andrea, congratulations on POTD honors...
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Date: 8/26/2017 11:30:00 AM
Congrats!!! Andrea POTD on this beautiful verse...god bless...^WW^
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