Vijay Pandit Poet Couplet

Blowing In the Wind

Deep in the harbor it's rowing our boat,
does it have the map to where we float?

Far in the woodland it's singing our song,
why didn't it follow us, to come along?

Up by the farm it's buzzing the cornfields,
hope it knows not to blow away the yields.

In open land, it's spinning the windmills,
people on the hill are happy with its skills.

What just caused the sun to blush,
and why did he wave goodbye in a rush?

Is it about the kiss, that the wind blew apart,
instead of landing directly in your heart?

Or about  butterflies humming with pollen,
playing cupid to pollinate buds swollen?

Why did the twilight fade so soon,
is it time already to welcome the moon?

Did wind shrill about our romantic dance?
I saw the moon winking in a glance.

Is there a message hidden in their wings?
I hope to find out with a beautiful ring.

August 22, 2017
Placed 4th:Blowing in the Wind contest by Nicola Byrne
HM: Your choice (9) contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George September 23, 2022 at 5:02 AM The invisible presence of the wind is felt by all and leaves us in doubt and a number of questions keep coming to our heart. Soothing and cooling as the wind that blows.

Connie Marcum Wong June 15, 2019 at 8:16 PM I am back to congratulate you on this winning poem Vijay. It was great to read it again! : )

Line Gauthier June 15, 2019 at 6:03 PM Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.

Sara Kendrick October 14, 2017 at 4:09 PM I liked each couplet about the wind..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for dropping by my page..Sara Vijay Pandit October 14, 2017 at 4:16 PM Thank you Sara!

Donna Roberts October 3, 2017 at 4:41 PM Good Day good day hope your ring is served on a sterling tray And the wind wont be strong enough to blow it away :) Beautiful write Vijay Pandit October 3, 2017 at 5:01 PM Thank you Donna!

Agnes Krampe September 20, 2017 at 8:18 AM Congrats on your placement, Vijay. Vijay Pandit September 20, 2017 at 9:21 AM Thank you Agnes!

James Swartz September 19, 2017 at 3:09 PM Stopping by again to say congratulations Vijay! Vijay Pandit September 19, 2017 at 3:12 PM Thank you James!

Constance La France September 19, 2017 at 8:51 AM Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS on your win ! Vijay Pandit September 19, 2017 at 10:19 AM Thank you BW!

Heidi Sands September 19, 2017 at 7:37 AM Congratulations Vijay :)

John Hamilton September 15, 2017 at 12:03 PM Beautiful couplets Vijay, there is a peace and serenity in this write, you certainly have a good understanding of nature and how we fit in to it. Enjoyed the read immensely! Vijay Pandit September 15, 2017 at 12:16 PM Thank you John--appreciate your comments!

Ralph Sergi September 13, 2017 at 2:53 PM hi Vijay: You have madewind add character to the flora and fauna. Unfortunately, We barely survived Irma's wind gusts with minimal damage and it certainly wasn't your beautiful winds. Vijay Pandit September 13, 2017 at 4:21 PM True Ralph--thank you for your visit!

Teddy Kimathi September 12, 2017 at 8:10 AM A brilliant piece, my friend! Keep your musings fire burning! :-) Vijay Pandit September 12, 2017 at 9:14 AM Thanks for your lovely comment Teddy!

Afolabi Muideen August 24, 2017 at 5:16 AM wow.... what a beautiful poem you have penned my friend. i enjoyed reading your gem. Vijay Pandit August 24, 2017 at 8:21 AM Thank you Afolabi, for your kind words!

Eve Roper August 23, 2017 at 9:41 PM romantic couplet, Vijay, good luck in the contest. ~* Vijay Pandit August 24, 2017 at 8:20 AM Thanks Eve--delighted by your visit and lovely comments!

James Swartz August 23, 2017 at 8:26 PM Great and beautiful poem Vijay! Vijay Pandit August 23, 2017 at 8:50 PM Thank you James.. appreciate your lovely comments!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 23, 2017 at 12:55 PM - You have many beautiful poems, Vijay ... but this must be the most beautiful - Good luck in contest, all I can give you is one "fave" and a hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit August 23, 2017 at 2:40 PM And that is all I need, Anne-Lise! So lovely to read you beautiful comments!!

Nette Onclaud August 23, 2017 at 6:00 AM vijay, pulling the heartstrings with your radiant work...i like the breezy feel of this one...lovely!...huggs Vijay Pandit August 23, 2017 at 7:15 AM Beautiful poetry in your words--loved your comments, nette!

Russell Sivey August 23, 2017 at 4:40 AM Ah, "I hope to find out with a beautiful ring," such a wonderful line there Vijay! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious poem this morning, such a romantic piece in such a way that it was hidden between the lines! What a glorious write my friend, I hope to read more like this from you! Great Work!! Vijay Pandit August 23, 2017 at 7:14 AM Lovely feedback from you Russell, as always! Many thanks for your heartfelt comments.

Connie Marcum Wong August 23, 2017 at 2:02 AM This Is so charming and creative Vijay! I loved reading g it and I hope it is a top winner! : ) Vijay Pandit August 23, 2017 at 7:12 AM Delighted by your visit and your lovely comments, Connie! Many thanks!

Kim Rodrigues August 22, 2017 at 9:26 PM Beautiful! Like a lovely song. Vijay Pandit August 22, 2017 at 9:45 PM Lovely comments.. thank you Kim, as always.. delighted by your visit!

Heidi Sands August 22, 2017 at 7:13 PM Hi Vijay, this is very smooth writing. You do it so well. I like the lines about the sun blushing and the moon winking. Very nice. I love the wind. Good luck in the contest :) Vijay Pandit August 22, 2017 at 8:25 PM Thanks, Heidi.. love your detailed feedback.. delighted you took the time to read this long poem!

Sunlite Wanter August 22, 2017 at 6:48 PM When I was young, I loved the wind - the sand and weeds and all of it. Lovely poem. Vijay Pandit August 22, 2017 at 7:00 PM Love your feedback SW--thanks for taking the time!

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2017 at 5:23 PM this is really really nice!! One of my favorite reads this day! Vijay Pandit August 22, 2017 at 6:26 PM So pleased with your comments Andrea--thank you!

Joseph May August 22, 2017 at 4:58 PM Wonderful write Vijay..I enjoyed the read Vijay Pandit August 22, 2017 at 5:06 PM Thanks Joseph.. love your comments!

Karen Croft August 22, 2017 at 4:12 PM beautiful poem. thank you so much for you kind words Vijay Pandit August 22, 2017 at 5:05 PM Thanks Karen! Yes of course, I like reading your short poems-- they are harder to write.