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Blowing In the Wind

Deep in the harbor it's rowing our boat, does it have the map to where we float? Far in the woodland it's singing our song, why didn't it follow us, to come along? Up by the farm it's buzzing the cornfields, hope it knows not to blow away the yields. In open land, it's spinning the windmills, people on the hill are happy with its skills. What just caused the sun to blush, and why did he wave goodbye in a rush? Is it about the kiss, that the wind blew apart, instead of landing directly in your heart? Or about butterflies humming with pollen, playing cupid to pollinate buds swollen? Why did the twilight fade so soon, is it time already to welcome the moon? Did wind shrill about our romantic dance? I saw the moon winking in a glance. Is there a message hidden in their wings? I hope to find out with a beautiful ring. August 22, 2017 Placed 4th:Blowing in the Wind contest by Nicola Byrne HM: Your choice (9) contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 9/23/2022 5:02:00 AM

The invisible presence of the wind is felt by all and leaves us in doubt and a number of questions keep coming to our heart. Soothing and cooling as the wind that blows.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/15/2019 8:16:00 PM

I am back to congratulate you on this winning poem Vijay. It was great to read it again! : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/15/2019 6:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2017 4:09:00 PM

I liked each couplet about the wind..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for dropping by my page..Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2017 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Sara!

Donna Roberts

Date: 10/3/2017 4:41:00 PM

Good Day good day hope your ring is served on a sterling tray And the wind wont be strong enough to blow it away :) Beautiful write

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2017 5:01:00 PM

Thank you Donna!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/20/2017 8:18:00 AM

Congrats on your placement, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Agnes!

James Swartz

Date: 9/19/2017 3:09:00 PM

Stopping by again to say congratulations Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 3:12:00 PM

Thank you James!

Constance La France

Date: 9/19/2017 8:51:00 AM

Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS on your win !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2017 10:19:00 AM

Thank you BW!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2017 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations Vijay :)

John Hamilton

Date: 9/15/2017 12:03:00 PM

Beautiful couplets Vijay, there is a peace and serenity in this write, you certainly have a good understanding of nature and how we fit in to it. Enjoyed the read immensely!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 12:16:00 PM

Thank you John--appreciate your comments!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/13/2017 2:53:00 PM

hi Vijay: You have madewind add character to the flora and fauna. Unfortunately, We barely survived Irma's wind gusts with minimal damage and it certainly wasn't your beautiful winds.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/13/2017 4:21:00 PM

True Ralph--thank you for your visit!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/12/2017 8:10:00 AM

A brilliant piece, my friend! Keep your musings fire burning! :-)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2017 9:14:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment Teddy!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/24/2017 5:16:00 AM

wow.... what a beautiful poem you have penned my friend. i enjoyed reading your gem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Afolabi, for your kind words!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/23/2017 9:41:00 PM

romantic couplet, Vijay, good luck in the contest. ~*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2017 8:20:00 AM

Thanks Eve--delighted by your visit and lovely comments!

James Swartz

Date: 8/23/2017 8:26:00 PM

Great and beautiful poem Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2017 8:50:00 PM

Thank you James.. appreciate your lovely comments!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2017 12:55:00 PM

- You have many beautiful poems, Vijay ... but this must be the most beautiful - Good luck in contest, all I can give you is one "fave" and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2017 2:40:00 PM

And that is all I need, Anne-Lise! So lovely to read you beautiful comments!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/23/2017 6:00:00 AM

vijay, pulling the heartstrings with your radiant work...i like the breezy feel of this one...lovely!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2017 7:15:00 AM

Beautiful poetry in your words--loved your comments, nette!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/23/2017 4:40:00 AM

Ah, "I hope to find out with a beautiful ring," such a wonderful line there Vijay! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious poem this morning, such a romantic piece in such a way that it was hidden between the lines! What a glorious write my friend, I hope to read more like this from you! Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2017 7:14:00 AM

Lovely feedback from you Russell, as always! Many thanks for your heartfelt comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/23/2017 2:02:00 AM

This Is so charming and creative Vijay! I loved reading g it and I hope it is a top winner! : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/23/2017 7:12:00 AM

Delighted by your visit and your lovely comments, Connie! Many thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2017 9:26:00 PM

Beautiful! Like a lovely song.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2017 9:45:00 PM

Lovely comments.. thank you Kim, as always.. delighted by your visit!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/22/2017 7:13:00 PM

Hi Vijay, this is very smooth writing. You do it so well. I like the lines about the sun blushing and the moon winking. Very nice. I love the wind. Good luck in the contest :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/22/2017 8:25:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi.. love your detailed feedback.. delighted you took the time to read this long poem!