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Blowing In the Wind

I sit on this hill that is colored green Not many people have even seen Thoughts are blowing in the wind here Swirling in the currents, dropping a tear Shifting from memories that are old and new Years blowing by, with all I went through I see faces as if they were frozen by a minute I can see all this from this place where I sit My heart falls in a dip, then wind lifts it high To keep on beating, as I breathe and I sigh Wind touches my face and blows my hair Refreshes me, as I hold on with sweet care Ride with the wind gusts, to lift me on my flight Through all that I face each day and each night Without the wind, I may not even see or know How to sort the thoughts in view, some to let go Heidi Sands *Placed 2nd in the Blowing in the Wind contest 8/20/17

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Date: 9/19/2017 8:40:00 PM
Wonderfully done, Heidi. It actually reminds me of my own little hill. Congratulations !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2017 8:53:00 PM
Hi Larry. Thank you very much. It is nice that it can remind you of your own little hill too :)
Date: 9/19/2017 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations Heidi! This poem is wonderful in every way. The rhyme and the imagery are perfect.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2017 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much James, for your kind feedback! :)
Date: 9/19/2017 2:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2017 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph. Great to see you :)
Date: 9/19/2017 1:04:00 PM
Congrats Heidi, this poem is well deserved of its rightful placement:-)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2017 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Keith! I appreciate your comment! :)
Date: 9/19/2017 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Heidi. I love how the wind has stirred your thoughts in this beautiful poem xxxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike. That is great to hear. Happy Tuesday! :) xo
Date: 9/19/2017 8:42:00 AM
Heidi, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful and amazing write!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 9/19/2017 8:38:00 AM
A joy to see you among the top winners--heartfelt congrats, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thanks so much Vijay!
Date: 8/21/2017 4:30:00 AM
I really loved this incredible write! What a beauty this one is! This is a stunning poem, I think you will do well in the contest my friend! What a delightful figurative piece, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2017 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Russell. I appreciate your comment. It means a lot to me :)
Date: 8/20/2017 3:49:00 PM
Very nice write Heidi, GL in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thank you , Joseph :) I appreciate your comment and best wishes!
Date: 8/20/2017 11:30:00 AM
Emotional journey well depicted--good luck for the contest, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2017 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I am no real confident with this one, it just came to me as is. I appreciate your comment :)

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