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Blossoms and Bubbles

BLOSSOMS and BUBBLES As petals fall from blossoms long denied the beauty of their warrantless false pride abated as love’s bubbles slow expired drowning in a love once so desired. Once tickling bubbles had ignited flame to blossom in the heart unknown to shame caressed by mindless passions sole resolve to tend the flame of heart fully involved. The blossoms could not stand the lurid heat thus did the petals fall at lovers feet last bubbles lay atop the warm champagne first tears the many lies that lovers feign. The scent of blossoms long expired flame eased by the numbing bubbles empty shame. 3/25/2015 submitted to – BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES – Poetry Contest sponsor – Olive Eloisa Guillermo

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Date: 4/18/2015 5:46:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~
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Date: 4/14/2015 1:16:00 AM
how sentimental, john.. huge congrats on your finest slot!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/14/2015 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Nette, always nice to hear from you
Date: 4/13/2015 10:33:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win! Light & LOve
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John Lawless
Date: 4/14/2015 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, as always, for your support Debbie
Date: 4/12/2015 9:42:00 PM
Very nice John, congrats!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/14/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Ed
Date: 4/12/2015 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win
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John Lawless
Date: 4/14/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Frederic for stopping by to comment
Date: 4/12/2015 6:13:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 4/14/2015 7:39:00 AM
Thanks again Jan.
Date: 4/12/2015 2:40:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 4/14/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Eve, for the kind words and the high marks.
Date: 4/12/2015 10:03:00 AM
Wonderful, John. I echo Carrie's comment about how deep you took this theme. My heartfelt congratulations on your top win! Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2015 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, as always your support and input are appreciated.
Date: 4/12/2015 9:48:00 AM
You have taken this theme, and created a deeper meaning out of your words! Excellent, John !! Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2015 9:59:00 AM
Thank you Carrie always nice to know you appreciated my writing.
Date: 4/12/2015 9:37:00 AM
--The depth and passion from each line… You portray for me the blossoms and bubbles attributes so well, from beginning to end… from life to nothing… the joyful atmosphere of the blossoms and bubbles growing beauty to fading tones and glows of them… I just like this so much! This one of the entries that after I read all entries, I remembered it!!!! This like the sum total of blossoms and bubbles as: lovely, playfulness, growth, the "lure" they possess… thank you!! A fave for me!//.olive eloisa
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/13/2015 8:40:00 AM
thank you.. :)!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2015 9:58:00 AM
Olive, thank you for this amazing "theme". It opened up a whole arena of "muse-ical" thought.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/12/2015 9:39:00 AM
I wish the others will see how beautiful your poem is... too little comments here!!!! :(! my BIG BIG CONGRATULATIONS!//olive eloisa
Date: 3/25/2015 7:15:00 PM
beautiful but sad imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 3/25/2015 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Jan, my muse often likes to look through the other end of the telescope

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