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Bloodhound

Morning has risen the sky is showing off a bit more enthusiasm than i with my ears hanging off the edge of the bed my worried look shows through the wrinkles slumped on my face i know the routine a quick kiss on the head leaving me with the same stain of faded pink lips as the coffee cup rim then you mutter i will be back soon and slam the door behind you i do my usual slide out the door that only i seem to use and bask in the sun awaiting your return it appears you forgot to lock the gate; i venture beyond the confines of this chained yard watching the little girl just down the street as she eats candy in similar shades of the rising sun she seems to be alone i guess she slipped out through an unlocked door i follow in a distance as not to startle her sniffing out crumbs of the candy she's left behind when i hear her faint cries i stop and change direction following that sweet scent a few blocks from our neighboring town it leads me to a red brick house with a white weathered fence people standing there crying out her name as they frantically look around i let out a little yelp coaxing them to follow me they hesitate but i insist you know how persistent i can be when on the trail of something i lead them to our part of town and the little girl with her candy trail rushes to her mother's arms they follow me back to our house as i slip in the gate they pat me on the head a bit more enthusiastic then you and slowly close the gate i bask in the sun and wait your arrival June 28, 2019 The Bloodhound Pick a title, volume 6 personification Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 7/26/2019 12:31:00 PM
What a delightful adventure. I so enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 7/20/2019 11:33:00 AM
Back to say congrats for your win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/20/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne....hugs :)
Date: 7/20/2019 11:30:00 AM
Sandy, back to say congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/20/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you John...hugs :)
Date: 7/20/2019 11:15:00 AM
Excellent, fun poem, Sandra:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/20/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward...thanks for sponsoring it, I had fun writing this one :) hugs
Date: 7/8/2019 12:23:00 AM
A fun little story. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/8/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you....it was a fun write, but it was hard to keep it short enough for a poem :) hugs
Date: 7/3/2019 8:23:00 PM
Sandra, this is just a super-fantaubulous story. I was hanging on every word... I think it ought to be at the top of the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/3/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thank you so much. The hardest part was trying to keep it short enough :). Hugs
Date: 6/29/2019 10:59:00 AM
Nicely penned, Sandy, I enjoyed your little story. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/29/2019 12:30:00 PM
thank you John, it was kind of a fun write :) hugs
Date: 6/29/2019 8:34:00 AM
Love it. You had me off the page into the story with you.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/29/2019 9:55:00 AM
lol thanks, it was hard to keep it on the shorter side! I have not done many personifications in my life, so glad this one turned out and thankful for the read and comment~ hugs
Date: 6/28/2019 8:51:00 PM
This is great Sandy, love the personification great storytelling!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/28/2019 9:02:00 PM
Thanks John, only the second personification I have ever written! :)

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