Constance La France Poet Haiku

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Blood and Fire Inferno

 

and beneath the earth
a realm of endless burning...
the sun is silent

forever darkness
with loud moaning like the wind ...
dead gnarled trees withered

a fierce hell abyss
with rivers of boiling blood ...
smells of decaying

serpents and dragons
guard the walls and gates of hell ...
three headed devil

violent storms howl
swirling and pushing down down ...
path of broken bones

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March 25, 2023


Poetry/Haiku/blood and fire inferno
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1533-961-25
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Haiku, nature theme, 5/7/5 syllables	

Written for the Premiere contest, Hell Haiku
sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 03/27/2023

First Place

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Frances Schiavina April 4, 2023 at 7:16 AM So well written it shakes the inner depth of the soul. Congratulations on brilliantly written trophy poem. Constance La France April 4, 2023 at 8:53 AM Frances, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !

Ann Peck March 28, 2023 at 8:40 AM Congratulations on First Place! Beautifully descriptive. Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:25 PM Ann, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings

Ryan Gayagay March 27, 2023 at 9:28 PM Congratulations, Constance, on your win! Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:26 PM Ryan, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings

Christuraj Alex March 27, 2023 at 8:32 PM Very beautiful painting. Congratulations! Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:26 PM Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Unseeking Seeker March 27, 2023 at 8:08 PM artistic, horrific (as meant to be), so vividly captured, congratulations on your top trophy win, Constance! Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:27 PM Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, blessings

Linda Alice Fowler March 27, 2023 at 7:21 PM Excellent Constance. Congratulations on your win! Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:27 PM Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Kim Rodrigues March 27, 2023 at 6:56 PM Congratulations on your first place win and vivid write, Constance! Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:28 PM Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2023 at 4:38 PM Some of these were truly haiku by the way you did the final lines on them. Very well done. I suspect you will be on the list! Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:28 PM Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings

Joanna Daniel March 26, 2023 at 10:52 PM Dark and vivid, who would want to go there? Well written, Constance:) Constance La France March 27, 2023 at 8:27 AM Joanna, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I don't want to go there for sure, blessings

Demetrios Trifiatis March 26, 2023 at 2:19 PM Powerful and outstanding creation depicting Hell so vividly, dearest Constance. Be blessed. Constance La France March 27, 2023 at 8:28 AM Demetrios, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings

Susan Lawrence March 25, 2023 at 9:46 PM Wow love the descriptions come to life in your visual portrait of hell ! Best of luck in the contest Constance . Susan :) Constance La France March 26, 2023 at 10:56 AM Susan, thank you so much for the compliment, and the encouragement, blessings, Constance

Yann Rolland March 25, 2023 at 8:40 PM very suggestive, you painted hell wonderfully thanks yann Constance La France March 26, 2023 at 10:57 AM Yann, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance

Laura Leiser March 25, 2023 at 8:04 PM Your descriptions of hell in haiku form are impressive and spot on, Constance. Well done and best of luck in the contest! Constance La France March 26, 2023 at 10:57 AM Laura, thank you so much for the compliment and the encouragement, blessings, Constance