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Dante's Inferno, Thieves by Chase Smith

and beneath the earth a realm of endless burning... the sun is silent forever darkness with loud moaning like the wind ... dead gnarled trees withered a fierce hell abyss with rivers of boiling blood ... smells of decaying serpents and dragons guard the walls and gates of hell ... three headed devil violent storms howl swirling and pushing down down ... path of broken bones _____________________ March 25, 2023 Poetry/Haiku/blood and fire inferno Copyright Protected, ID 03-1533-961-25 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Haiku, nature theme, 5/7/5 syllables Written for the Premiere contest, Hell Haiku sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 03/27/2023 First Place

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Date: 4/4/2023 7:16:00 AM
So well written it shakes the inner depth of the soul. Congratulations on brilliantly written trophy poem.
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Date: 4/4/2023 8:53:00 AM
Frances, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !
Date: 3/28/2023 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on First Place! Beautifully descriptive.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2023 12:25:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings
Date: 3/27/2023 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance, on your win!
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Date: 3/28/2023 12:26:00 PM
Ryan, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings
Date: 3/27/2023 8:32:00 PM
Very beautiful painting. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/28/2023 12:26:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 3/27/2023 8:08:00 PM
artistic, horrific (as meant to be), so vividly captured, congratulations on your top trophy win, Constance!
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Date: 3/28/2023 12:27:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, blessings
Date: 3/27/2023 7:21:00 PM
Excellent Constance. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/28/2023 12:27:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 3/27/2023 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win and vivid write, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2023 12:28:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings
Date: 3/27/2023 4:38:00 PM
Some of these were truly haiku by the way you did the final lines on them. Very well done. I suspect you will be on the list!
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Date: 3/28/2023 12:28:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings
Date: 3/26/2023 10:52:00 PM
Dark and vivid, who would want to go there? Well written, Constance:)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2023 8:27:00 AM
Joanna, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I don't want to go there for sure, blessings
Date: 3/26/2023 2:19:00 PM
Powerful and outstanding creation depicting Hell so vividly, dearest Constance. Be blessed.
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Date: 3/27/2023 8:28:00 AM
Demetrios, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings
Date: 3/25/2023 9:46:00 PM
Wow love the descriptions come to life in your visual portrait of hell ! Best of luck in the contest Constance . Susan :)
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Date: 3/26/2023 10:56:00 AM
Susan, thank you so much for the compliment, and the encouragement, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/25/2023 8:40:00 PM
very suggestive, you painted hell wonderfully thanks yann
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Date: 3/26/2023 10:57:00 AM
Yann, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/25/2023 8:04:00 PM
Your descriptions of hell in haiku form are impressive and spot on, Constance. Well done and best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/26/2023 10:57:00 AM
Laura, thank you so much for the compliment and the encouragement, blessings, Constance

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