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In the late 1960’s, Granny washed dishes By hand – no dishwasher for her; Though she often had her daughter wash Who was 10 years older than I was Who I followed every waking hour Who I loved as only a sister is loved Who I would always, to this day, admire She was the one who taught me everything – To dream, to paint, to dance, to pray She was the courageous, outgoing, fireball I was quiet and shy, a curly haired introvert ~ When she washed dishes after supper I stood by her side, on a stool which lifted me High enough to put my hands on the side Where the rinse water would be poured. ~ My Granny was faithfully sanitary to say the least She rinsed her dished with boiling water from the stove And that was just what my aunt-sister did that day As I screamed from the pain that caused those Angry blisters over my small arms and hands.

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Date: 10/14/2019 10:45:00 PM
Oh no, Gina! This story was so endearing, I wish it had a happier ending...But the love still shines through ~ thank you for sharing!
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/14/2019 11:03:00 PM
Things like this happen in childhood. Not a big deal now - it was then though. Blessings, love and prayers for you, Gina
Date: 10/14/2019 9:47:00 PM
oh how terrible. How old were you about three? I put my baby in her highchair near the kitchen range to keep warm while I went to see why her older sister was crying. My baby cried but I thought it was because I had left her. When I came back she had slipped over and her hand was on the hot stove. I have never forgiven my self and that was seventy years ago.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/14/2019 11:02:00 PM
You should definitely forgive yourself, although I'd probably be like that too. Your baby certainly doesn't remember I bet. Love and prayers for you, Gina
Date: 10/14/2019 11:30:00 AM
oh my , you ended it with being scalded!! My mom accidentally poured out the boiling potato water onto my arm and it was HORRIBLE pain. Did you have to soak your arms and hands in cold water for a long time like I did? I love that you admired your aunt so much.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/14/2019 11:02:00 PM
I did have to put it in cold water and have medicine put on it. It was scalded for sure, … I just didn't say it. We had the same thing happen then. Love and prayers to you and thanks for reading, Gina
Date: 10/14/2019 10:08:00 AM
you pen this tale well but ouch, i can almost feel that scolding hot water... wonderful poetic story my friend... blessings and hugs :)
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/14/2019 11:01:00 PM
It was painful, but can't get through childhood without some mishaps... Love to you and thanks for reading, Gina

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