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Blissful Rain

Silver pearls drop from sky coating everything with silver Trees shine after silver bath Sun stands humbled as few vapors block its light You can't drink everything. All around mirrors of varied shapes reflect the surrounds A mesmerizing beauty God showers blessing with love Pure unadulterated to satiate the thirst of all Wind dances joyously Trees sway merrily Mother earth is grateful Rain, a miracle of God Water going up, becoming clouds Falling same time every year We are filled with awe And bow down before Him In humble gratitude 14.07.2021 Brain Strand contest 1st position

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/17/2021 2:09:00 AM

Beautiful, Rama:) enjoyed this one very much:)

Aamy Khan

Date: 7/15/2021 9:56:00 AM

Wise use of metaphors and a very beautiful construction as well.Power to your pen

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/15/2021 3:51:00 AM

Beautifully depicted ... Enjoyed reading it..

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/14/2021 11:34:00 PM

Yes where would we be without it, Rama, love your poetic symphony.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/14/2021 2:50:00 PM

Dear Rama, looks like we both love rain! Rain brings a lot of memories for me - I grew up in India, where, you are very aware of - monsoon is the most loved season. Hugs ~ Mala

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2021 12:54:00 PM

I’m twirling in the blissful rain! Blessings go up and down! God bless!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/14/2021 11:55:00 AM

This is absolutely elegant Rama in its poetic picture of delightful images! I hope it finds a way to a contest. It is a winner. I hope that you received my response to your wonderful comment on At One With. I managed to respond in the wrong space and while correcting it managed to delete both your comment and my response! This has happened before. I feel so badly. It was a wonderful message from you. Blessings dear friend.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/14/2021 7:45:00 AM

Rain is delightful and blissful, and so is your incredibly written poem. I loved this: Rain, a miracle of God Water going up, becoming clouds blessings and best regards