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He loves me He loves me not … He loves me He loves me not … When the rose tinted petals fell from my eyes I was no longer blinded - finally I could see his deception Photograph #No 1 Under 10 lines Contest. Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A. 04~16~16

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Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 4/21/2016 5:39:00 AM

First I felt the warmth of "he loves me" then I was stunned by the realization of the deception. Awesome write, congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2016 5:57:00 AM

Thanks Dineen I am delighted PD liked my poem so much to give it a 2nd place:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2016 10:55:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 4/20/2016 1:36:00 AM

Many thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/19/2016 5:26:00 AM

Congratulation on ur win. It is outstanding............with love

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2016 5:35:00 AM

Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2016 2:18:00 AM

Wow Jan. Congratulations on your number 2 spot. A fantastic winning entry you created! Kudos! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2016 3:15:00 AM

Many thanks Connie I was delighted to place so highly:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Mcclain

Date: 4/18/2016 9:06:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congrats on your impressive contest with this excellent meditation on deception. Cheers, Brian

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2016 3:14:00 AM

Many thanks Brian:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/18/2016 9:01:00 PM

So simple and beautiful!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2016 3:14:00 AM

Many thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/18/2016 5:44:00 PM

Excellent verses, Jan. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 5:48:00 PM

Thanks so much Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2016 3:26:00 PM

I didn't even see this yet?? What??? Wow, awesome poem AND win. Congrats, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 3:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/18/2016 1:12:00 PM

I was right, Jan! Congrats on a top win for this amazing write! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 1:13:00 PM

Thanks Sandra - you were correct ... I'm delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/18/2016 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 12:57:00 PM

Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2016 11:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win with superb placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 11:28:00 AM

Many thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/18/2016 11:27:00 AM

Congrats Jan on big win. love. Anisha d

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 11:28:00 AM

Many thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2016 8:58:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 9:01:00 AM

Many thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/18/2016 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win:)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 8:34:00 AM

Many thanks Jo I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 1:46:00 AM

JAn, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 6:12:00 AM

I will and thanks again Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 1:45:00 AM

Hi Jan, this was clever and creative. Reminds me of me... LOL, I was young and wanted to know if my crush loved me too... sweet and cute. However, the two lines that placed you with the second top win was the last two lines. --no longer BLINDED I could SEE--- HAHA, I was super picky in this contest. LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 6:12:00 AM

WOW thanks so much Linda I am delighted to place so well - I too was inspired when I saw the daisies and it brought back childhood memories but the daisies over her eyes did blind her to the truth:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/17/2016 4:01:00 PM

Love the way you interpreted this picture, Jan! Excellent! I feel it will be a top winner! Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/18/2016 1:46:00 AM

I sure did... :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2016 4:22:00 PM

Thanks Sandra I do hope Linda likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/17/2016 3:09:00 PM

Hi Jan: I love the way you interpreted the photo. I was thinking Monochrome.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2016 3:11:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Ralph I do appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/17/2016 2:22:00 PM

Excellent and Wise.. Deception can come when least expected...Loved it Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2016 2:23:00 PM

Thanks Charma - no matter how painful it is ... it just takes the blinkers to fall from the eyes:-( hugs jan xx

Niyomi Shah

Date: 4/17/2016 5:31:00 AM

i really love your interpretation of the picture.... tells the story of every woman who ever went through pain because of their cheating husband/lover etc. great job!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2016 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Niyomi - I found the image beautiful but sad and the rain on the window reminded me of tears:-( Hugs jan xx