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Blind To the Truth

Drifting afar he sees not round the bend. Living his days as there were more to come, Blind to the truth he can't foresee the end. Recklessly thinking he has time to spend, Wastes the good days ensnared by demon rum. Day after day in one another blend. Just one more drink has caused him to succumb. So many good men can't their habits mend. His loved ones beg, he's too good at pretend And listens only to his lover's drum. Drifting afar he sees not round the bend. Blind to the truth, he can't foresee the end. By: Joyce Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/14/2014 9:31:00 AM
My friend, this is a great write. The message clear, the rhyme fine and the flow is excellent! Bravo!!!!!!
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Date: 8/26/2014 2:07:00 PM
wonderful! very well written, joyce!
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Date: 8/26/2014 9:22:00 AM
joyce- I really enjoyed this poem- when it comes to the drink many of us have a blind spot. I wrote a poem "the family curse" about addiction in my family. I hope you check it out. :-) Christine
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