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Blind~yet in god belief grows! river I hear in me flows, sky with my eyes cannot see, with each breath sky goes through me, I can feel dear mother earth, not seen mother who gave birth, Blind~yet in god belief grows!
7 syllables each line, 7 lines AaBbCcDdA rhyme Elemental Poetry contest Charles Messina sponsored Written 10/July/2021

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Date: 7/31/2021 5:31:00 AM
Well done, Krish. I like the way you did this...Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/31/2021 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Charles! Honoured to be credit with a win!:)
Date: 7/31/2021 4:34:00 AM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/31/2021 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Christuraj!:)
Date: 7/14/2021 2:10:00 PM
There are so many ways to see, you have shown how our other senses can fill us up and show us another kind of vision, best wishes for the contest!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/15/2021 2:04:00 AM
Thanks Michelle. Good to have you visit my PS page!
Date: 7/10/2021 7:53:00 AM
Profound thoughts, Krish - your approach is unique. You are coming up with great ideas with every new poem of yours. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/10/2021 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Mala! Delighted to get such lovely words! Kind regards Krish
Date: 7/10/2021 7:03:00 AM
Very deep. Liked the first and last line. Spark of positivism. All the best for contest
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/10/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Rama! Visually impaired are least understood in this world, although they are just like us in many ways!!
Date: 7/10/2021 3:39:00 AM
This is profound, Krish...so well written:)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/10/2021 4:23:00 AM
Thanks Jo! People who are denied sight see world through other senses.