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Blind Minds

On a lonely shore crowded with people I dropped a pebble into a rock pool Saw ripples obliterate the sky Smothering voices of Yates and Goldsmith Gods are not heard in underwater minds

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Date: 9/16/2011 4:18:00 PM
Enjoyed the piece here Eamon, i see an aversion to the irrelevant here, and a struggle with the shallow values promoted by mainstream oriented pundits..a desire for more depth.
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