Blind Minds

On a lonely shore crowded with people
I dropped a pebble into a rock pool
Saw ripples obliterate the sky
Smothering voices of Yates and Goldsmith
Gods are not heard in underwater minds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 16, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Enjoyed the piece here Eamon, i see an aversion to the irrelevant here, and a struggle with the shallow values promoted by mainstream oriented pundits..a desire for more depth.
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