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Bless These Creatures

Hurricane’s torrent forced the river to rise high Bursting dam left catfish laying on rocks now dry Writhing and gasping for breath in arid air warm Lord, bless these creatures; give them shelter from the storm Stray kittens had climbed high into the lofty pines A stepping stone for babes, mama cat heard their whines As with lost footing, she floated downstream free form Lord, bless these creatures; give them shelter from the storm His web feet tangled in taut strands of fishing line Blue-eyed pelican hung from a limb like a vine Around him, voracious vultures began to swarm Lord, bless these creatures; give them shelter from the storm Howling I heard, driving home after the storm passed From home, a pup had been mistakenly been outcast Grabbed it from a sinking boat, owners I informed Lord, bless these creatures; give them shelter from the storm Human costs are all we hear in hurricane tales Only angels keep watch o’er those with scales and tails Saving some with random acts of kindness performed Our Lord’s blessed these creatures with shelter from the storm *July 12, 2014 for Deb's contest

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Date: 8/1/2014 11:25:00 PM
Sweet poem Carolyn. The creatures are too often the last to be helped. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2014 9:32:00 AM
How true, it is the same with all the forest fires we have had. They talk about homes lost but not about the fact so many animals have been displaced from their homes. Congratulations on your win, excellent poem.
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Date: 8/1/2014 9:18:00 AM
Lovely thoughts expressed here, Carolyn. In the rush and panic to save humans and worldly possessions we often forget these creatures that need a helping hand in times of danger. / Congrats on another fine win! // paul
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Date: 8/1/2014 8:27:00 AM
This is indeed a very inspiring write my dear friend! Kudos to you for thinking of God's lesser creatures my friend.... HUGE congrats on your fine win!!!!!!
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:04:00 AM
Showers of applause to you Carolyn! ^_^ Regards, Teddy.
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:29:00 AM
That was a sure winner dear Carolyn,, and it did,, big congrats !
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Date: 8/1/2014 4:54:00 AM
Awesome write on kindness, Carolyn. Congrats
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Date: 7/31/2014 4:50:00 PM
This is so sweet and caring, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/31/2014 3:04:00 PM
So glad you mentioned kindness to all man's best friends. I hope all is well with you. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/13/2014 4:35:00 PM
Nailed it honey bun, nailed it! Hmmm being a bit greedy maybe 1 stanza where someone rescues an animal hon? Light & Love
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Date: 7/13/2014 1:46:00 AM
Devastating hurricanes ! God save all from these,, truly we just talk about humans ,, while many more lives as said are wasted! Awesome write Carolyn,, gl in contest!
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