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Bleeding Words

In my poetic thoughts words swirl&tumble&twist like a caged bird trapped&wishing to be set free- fluttering in vain my muse is like that bird . . . so, I pick up my penning pen&write&write&write, oh, muse has set me free or have I set muse free (?) and my pen is bleeding words_ ___________________________ August 28, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Bleeding Words Copyright Protected, ID 20-1281-921-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (28) sponsor, Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/31/2020 12:39:00 PM

Wonderful metaphor for setting words free, Constance. Love the format. You really gave us a sense of your words trapped, caged and then set free! Congratulations your podium win!

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2020 5:36:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/30/2020 6:25:00 PM

Good queston...What will it be for you...

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2020 5:36:00 PM

Arturo, thanks so much for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate _Constance

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/28/2020 1:39:00 PM

Wow you just wrote it and I'm your first visitor and commenter. I can relate to this awesome fabulous muse as I have sth like this of my muse wriggling to be freed to bleed. Kudos!! plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2020 5:38:00 PM

Zaynab, I am honored to have you as my first visitor a, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate and for sure I will visit your poem _Constance