Bleeding Soul

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The rain still falls like the pulse of my heart, like a hammer beating as I stand at your grave; I weep, weep still that you had to depart, have been told by family- time to let go and be brave. Yet, I am chained and shackled to this dead love; and will be forevermore 'till I am with you above. ________________________________ October 1, 2019 Poetry/Verse/Bleeding Soul Copyright Protected, ID 19-1195-424-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Arturo Michael

Date: 10/1/2019 3:02:00 PM

Only a perfect fit...would cry like this...a true heart lays bear...

Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2019 7:42:00 PM

Arturo, you are so right, perfect.. thanks for visiting my poem !

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/1/2019 2:59:00 PM

Amazing write wow!;)

Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2019 7:41:00 PM

Brenda, thanks so much for the compliment !

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/1/2019 2:45:00 PM

Heart to heart.. soul to soul. I get it!! For me another would be a substitute always lacking what made the original soulmate bond. I'll wear my chains until we meet again. Elegant penning.

Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2019 7:40:00 PM

Debra, thanks for visiting my poem and for the wonderful comment, appreciate !

Chris Green

Date: 10/1/2019 1:53:00 PM

Sad and deeply felt. The sorrow and loneliness cries from this grief laden poem. Wonderfully written emotions my friend but oh so sad.

Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2019 1:57:00 PM

Chris, thank you for your compassion, people mean well when they say let go, but sometimes a person just cannot and that is me, never ever ever. thanks for the compliment on my writing .