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Pierced by shards of shattered glass Deeper and deeper you stab me With lies and venomous words Dissecting my heart piece by piece Crushed like the petals of a withered rose I’m dying … Scarlet blood seeps into my very soul Drip Drip Drip Into pieces and a bloody mess I scarified secrets; Secrets you tore and tore, Gracing a fake friendship, Trust tossed like a sweaty towel Now karma a poisonous snake You plea ... To be on death row, decomposing Dripping into the night -- Silently fading and fading Stung by my viper lips, smiling grinning laughing Until you are no more A Poet Destroyer Collaboration Collaboration Celebration Contest 7th August 2015

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Darren White

Date: 10/5/2016 2:05:00 PM

That is POWERFUL! And chillingly good...

Dilinie Gunasinghe

Date: 9/17/2016 6:57:00 AM

Hi, i'm doing a project about your poem "Bleeding Love". Can you please send me some stuff about it like: 1) What the poem is about 2) Where you grew up 3) Your childhood Thanks :)

Dilinie Gunasinghe

Date: 9/17/2016 6:52:00 AM

Hi, i'm doing a project about your poem "Bleeding Love". Can you please send me some stuff about it like: 1) What the poem is about 2) Where you grew up 3) Your childhood Thanks :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2016 6:55:00 AM

Please soup mail me

Dilinie Gunasinghe

Date: 9/17/2016 6:51:00 AM

Hi, i'm doing a project about your poem "Bleeding Love". Can you please send me some stuff about it like: 1) What the poem is about 2) Where you grew up 3) Your childhood Thanks :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 5/24/2016 9:28:00 AM

Lovely Jan, thanks for sharing!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2016 6:55:00 AM

so sorry I missed replying to your comment Sara- have only just discovered it:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Davey

Date: 5/23/2016 4:44:00 AM

The format on this write is amazing! Great presentation to go along with an epic write! Congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2016 6:02:00 AM

It was a fabulous experience to write with PD:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2016 12:32:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2016 6:02:00 AM

Thanks Skat it was such an honour to write with PD am so pleased this poem is getting greater exposure through your contest:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 10/10/2015 2:27:00 PM

Power-ful girls, what a write, and so deserving it's placing. Way to go girls, hugs//James xx

James Fraser
Date: 10/10/2015 4:12:00 PM

I certainly have no worries where your Muse takes you. My support will always be there Jan. I love what you write, if it makes a reader think and smile. There really isn't anything else any writer can do / hugs // James xxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2015 2:32:00 PM

I was SO SO SO made up to write with Linda and the fact she loved the write so much to give it a top placement meant so much - I do worry where my muse takes me some time:-( hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 9/9/2015 12:09:00 PM

Jan and Poet Destroyer congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2015 5:47:00 PM

Many thanks Michael it was a privilege to write with PD and the fist place was simply the icing on the cake:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola

Date: 9/6/2015 12:54:00 PM

What an awesome collaboration between 2 of the most vivid artists I have confronted..I just really love Karma :), jill

Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2015 4:42:00 PM

Oh Jill thanks for such a lovely comment - i am a mere novice compared to PD - she is a tour de force when it comes to writing. I got out of my comfort zone with this dark write and Linda was amazing to work with:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 9/5/2015 1:54:00 PM

A superb write. Became more intense with a bleeding heRt! Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thanks Balveen it was a real privilege to write with PD and to get a first place was a dream come true:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 9/5/2015 11:14:00 AM

Wow! This is absolutely a stunning write by both of you with our dearest friend, PD my dearest friend, Jan! A super duper 7 too from me. Hand salute and BIG CONGRATS! love lots, Leonora

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2015 11:17:00 AM

Thanks Leonora PD was awesome to work with and I was over the moon to place so highly - I truly am in awe of her creativity to write with so many poets each with a different style - simply amazing:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2015 10:14:00 PM

Big congrats on you two creating this dark but compelling poem ... Another super 7..

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2015 2:39:00 AM

Thanks Robert I had great fun writing this - a little out of my comfort zone with a dark write but it was well worth it:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul

Date: 9/4/2015 10:22:00 AM

Congrats on a great write to both....... George

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thanks George it was a wonderful experience to write with PD and to get first place was the icing on the cake - she is awesome!!! :-) hugs Jan xx

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/3/2015 7:54:00 AM

Hey Jan, BIG congratulations on your win in Linda's awesome contest!! This is a truly excellent collaboration from the both of you. The darkness of it sucks you in so deep. Be Blessed, Neva

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Neva:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/3/2015 12:14:00 AM

Jan, I really enjoyed this dark write. You and PD did an outstanding collab. Congrats on your win:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Alexis it was great to step out of my comfort zone and write something deep and dark:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2015 10:52:00 PM

Wonderful Jan, great collab with Linda, Congrats on top place win!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 8:00:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 9/2/2015 10:48:00 PM

Wonderful composition... very well deserved top position win... Congrats and hugs, Bobby

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 8:00:00 AM

Thanks so much Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2015 10:06:00 PM

You two made one very DEEP poem, Jan. I remember thinking this was a wow poem earlier! BIG congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 7:59:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea I am simply over the moon at the placement and the lovely comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 9:24:00 PM

Hello Jan, I have our collaboration up... Hope you enjoy stopping by, as I have here so many times. :) LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Linda I have dropped by to comment on your page - I can't stop smiling at my placement thanks once again:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/2/2015 8:04:00 PM

Amazing co-write, Jan and Linda! Very powerful! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandra I was stunned and delighted to get a first place:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/2/2015 5:44:00 PM

A great winning cowrite... Congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph it was an incredible experience writing with Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 3:20:00 PM

Hi Jan, this was small, but one of my faves. I don't know if the drip is a torn heart. You two rocked this one. SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2015 3:29:00 PM

Thanks so much Skat. I wrote of my comfort zone with the deep and dark imagery Linda responded in her own unique style am so so delighted with the result so pleased you liked it too:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2015 2:40:00 PM

So pleased to see this winning co-write in first place!! This dark offering captivated me on the first read; sound even better on rereading it! Congratulations. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2015 2:44:00 PM

I am overjoyed with the placement Paul and reading through the winning poems am totally blown away with the way Linda can adapt to all styles and themes:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 1:25:00 PM

Hi Jan, Once again, I'm Enjoying our collaboration. EPIC & DARK. Love the ending twist. LOL, I hope you do not mind? That's how my mind works. Now you know, why I call myself the POET DESTROYER. This was so much fun. Quick, but fun. Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. I have a new blog up "MY FELLINGS" Stop by my latest blog and poem when you have the time. I'd like to have your permission, on posting this poem on my page in the near future. ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2015 1:56:00 PM

Oh Wow Linda! I don't think I've ever placed so highly in one of your contests before! It was a change of style for me - I know you love writing deep and dark and it turned out far better than I could have ever dreamed of. Please post it on your page :-) hugs Jan xx