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Pierced by shards of shattered glass Deeper and deeper you stab me With lies and venomous words Dissecting my heart piece by piece Crushed like the petals of a withered rose I’m dying … Scarlet blood seeps into my very soul Drip Drip Drip Into pieces and a bloody mess I scarified secrets; Secrets you tore and tore, Gracing a fake friendship, Trust tossed like a sweaty towel Now karma a poisonous snake You plea ... To be on death row, decomposing Dripping into the night -- Silently fading and fading Stung by my viper lips, smiling grinning laughing Until you are no more A Poet Destroyer Collaboration Collaboration Celebration Contest 7th August 2015

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Date: 10/5/2016 2:05:00 PM
That is POWERFUL! And chillingly good...
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:57:00 AM
Hi, i'm doing a project about your poem "Bleeding Love". Can you please send me some stuff about it like: 1) What the poem is about 2) Where you grew up 3) Your childhood Thanks :)
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:52:00 AM
Hi, i'm doing a project about your poem "Bleeding Love". Can you please send me some stuff about it like: 1) What the poem is about 2) Where you grew up 3) Your childhood Thanks :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/17/2016 6:55:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:51:00 AM
Hi, i'm doing a project about your poem "Bleeding Love". Can you please send me some stuff about it like: 1) What the poem is about 2) Where you grew up 3) Your childhood Thanks :)
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Date: 5/24/2016 9:28:00 AM
Lovely Jan, thanks for sharing!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/17/2016 6:55:00 AM
so sorry I missed replying to your comment Sara- have only just discovered it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/23/2016 4:44:00 AM
The format on this write is amazing! Great presentation to go along with an epic write! Congrats
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/23/2016 6:02:00 AM
It was a fabulous experience to write with PD:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/23/2016 12:32:00 AM
Jan, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/23/2016 6:02:00 AM
Thanks Skat it was such an honour to write with PD am so pleased this poem is getting greater exposure through your contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/10/2015 2:27:00 PM
Power-ful girls, what a write, and so deserving it's placing. Way to go girls, hugs//James xx
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James Fraser
Date: 10/10/2015 4:12:00 PM
I certainly have no worries where your Muse takes you. My support will always be there Jan. I love what you write, if it makes a reader think and smile. There really isn't anything else any writer can do / hugs // James xxxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/10/2015 2:32:00 PM
I was SO SO SO made up to write with Linda and the fact she loved the write so much to give it a top placement meant so much - I do worry where my muse takes me some time:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2015 7:23:00 PM
Jan, you and Linda have incredible chemistry.. The results are magic. Congrats on your amazing winner!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/11/2015 2:48:00 AM
It was a great honour to write with Linda and to get a first place was simply the icing on the cake:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/9/2015 12:09:00 PM
Jan and Poet Destroyer congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/9/2015 5:47:00 PM
Many thanks Michael it was a privilege to write with PD and the fist place was simply the icing on the cake:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/6/2015 12:54:00 PM
What an awesome collaboration between 2 of the most vivid artists I have confronted..I just really love Karma :), jill
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Date: 9/6/2015 4:42:00 PM
Oh Jill thanks for such a lovely comment - i am a mere novice compared to PD - she is a tour de force when it comes to writing. I got out of my comfort zone with this dark write and Linda was amazing to work with:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/5/2015 1:54:00 PM
A superb write. Became more intense with a bleeding heRt! Congrats on your win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2015 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Balveen it was a real privilege to write with PD and to get a first place was a dream come true:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/5/2015 11:14:00 AM
Wow! This is absolutely a stunning write by both of you with our dearest friend, PD my dearest friend, Jan! A super duper 7 too from me. Hand salute and BIG CONGRATS! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/5/2015 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Leonora PD was awesome to work with and I was over the moon to place so highly - I truly am in awe of her creativity to write with so many poets each with a different style - simply amazing:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/4/2015 10:14:00 PM
Big congrats on you two creating this dark but compelling poem ... Another super 7..
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2015 2:39:00 AM
Thanks Robert I had great fun writing this - a little out of my comfort zone with a dark write but it was well worth it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/4/2015 10:22:00 AM
Congrats on a great write to both....... George
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/4/2015 1:08:00 PM
Thanks George it was a wonderful experience to write with PD and to get first place was the icing on the cake - she is awesome!!! :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/3/2015 7:54:00 AM
Hey Jan, BIG congratulations on your win in Linda's awesome contest!! This is a truly excellent collaboration from the both of you. The darkness of it sucks you in so deep. Be Blessed, Neva
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 8:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Neva:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/3/2015 12:14:00 AM
Jan, I really enjoyed this dark write. You and PD did an outstanding collab. Congrats on your win:-)Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 8:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Alexis it was great to step out of my comfort zone and write something deep and dark:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 10:52:00 PM
Wonderful Jan, great collab with Linda, Congrats on top place win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 10:48:00 PM
Wonderful composition... very well deserved top position win... Congrats and hugs, Bobby
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 10:06:00 PM
You two made one very DEEP poem, Jan. I remember thinking this was a wow poem earlier! BIG congrats to you.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 7:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea I am simply over the moon at the placement and the lovely comments:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 9:24:00 PM
Hello Jan, I have our collaboration up... Hope you enjoy stopping by, as I have here so many times. :) LINDA
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Linda I have dropped by to comment on your page - I can't stop smiling at my placement thanks once again:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 8:04:00 PM
Amazing co-write, Jan and Linda! Very powerful! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 7:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra I was stunned and delighted to get a first place:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 5:44:00 PM
A great winning cowrite... Congrats
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/3/2015 1:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph it was an incredible experience writing with Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 3:20:00 PM
Hi Jan, this was small, but one of my faves. I don't know if the drip is a torn heart. You two rocked this one. SKAT
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/2/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Skat. I wrote of my comfort zone with the deep and dark imagery Linda responded in her own unique style am so so delighted with the result so pleased you liked it too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 2:40:00 PM
So pleased to see this winning co-write in first place!! This dark offering captivated me on the first read; sound even better on rereading it! Congratulations. Hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/2/2015 2:44:00 PM
I am overjoyed with the placement Paul and reading through the winning poems am totally blown away with the way Linda can adapt to all styles and themes:-) hugs jan xx
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