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Bleeding Hearts

My plantings of bleeding hearts are finally in bloom There's a hint of sweet scent in their delicate perfume On multiple stems of fragile heart-shaped flowers they are thriving in the shade of my arbors and bowers Gently, they sway when a willowy breeze blows by Do I hear a soft whisper of sadness when they sigh? Beauties, they are, but a tear dangles from each eye It's as if they are filled with sorrow, and now they cry. Is their sad weeping because they're in a garden? If they wish to be wild again, I must beg their pardon for wanting to enjoy the hue of their purple color. Forgive me, tiny flowers. I'm not a botanist or scholar. I've been selfish by keeping you confined like a child when you'd rather be in the meadow, growing wild. I've dug your roots and transplanted them near me, removed you from your home. I've acted shamefully. No wonder your heads droop and your hearts bleed. No longer are you where you wish to drop your seed. I'll collect your seedlings. In the meadow they'll be sown, sprouting your lineage where gentle winds have blown. I'll pray for their growth on lands where you once grew, hoping this gesture will somehow be pleasing to you. May your offspring flourish under nourishing Spring rain. I promise I'll never tread through your meadow again. June 5, 2022 Purple Flower Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

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Date: 6/29/2022 6:44:00 AM
Very beautiful, Jenna! Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/29/2022 7:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim.
Date: 6/26/2022 4:48:00 PM
Jenna, this is such a lovely poem of caring Flowers, all living things respond to love. Congratulations on first place!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2022 4:52:00 PM
Thank you ever so much for your kind words, Ann.
Date: 6/26/2022 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2022 4:52:00 PM
Many thanks, times over for you continued support, Paula.
Date: 6/26/2022 12:27:00 AM
Dicentra spectabilis.- A very beautiful flower. Great painting. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2022 4:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Date: 6/25/2022 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your top-winning placement, Jenna... Very well-deserved dear friend. Warm hugs
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2022 4:51:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Lasaad.
Date: 6/7/2022 5:21:00 AM
you have crafted a beautiful poem once again Jenna, absolutely wonderfully done!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2022 6:53:00 AM
Thanks so much for the kudos, Mark. I appreciate your read.
Date: 6/6/2022 1:46:00 AM
Love the story of the bleeding hearts, Jenna and how you return them to their rightful home. I agree with Milton, a winner for sure Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2022 6:53:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I often personify things in my mind, wondering what they may be thinking. It's something I've done since I was a child.
Date: 6/5/2022 9:58:00 AM
Lovely flowers, Well done for a meticulous description and great imagery.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/5/2022 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Victor.
Date: 6/5/2022 9:29:00 AM
Jenna, Jenna, Jenna. I simply do not know how you write consistently beautiful lines! This poem is already a winner in my book. A delightful poem that tells a wondeful story. I used to have Bleeding Hearts in hanging baskets, but I've never been able to keep them flourishing for long. I think you may have pointed out why. Exceptional writing, as always.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/5/2022 1:03:00 PM
Thank you for so many wonderful comments you always bestow upon my poetry. Sometimes, I get a few thoughts, find rhyming words that I attach to the file,then let it sit for a while. I enjoy editing and there are times when it takes a lot, or even go in a different direction. Bleeding Hearts love a shady spot and if in a hanging basket, they need a lot of water. If you think it’s a winner, that’s enough for me.

Book: Shattered Sighs