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"A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else." John Burroughs
Bearing own fault is a virtuous deed while admitting it with repentant plight blaming others reveal immature creed along selfishness of arrogant blight. Despite frustration of failure-caused pain bearing own fault is a virtuous creed confessing guilt as God grants pardon-gain since He knows motive midst forgiveness-need. Aware of sin's fruit and how it does breed my human nature humbles down to say "bearing own fault is a virtuous creed"--- though I fall* and fail, I pray for light's ray. Responsible for my error, I face consequences... beseeching to be freed practicing divinely this truth by grace: bearing own fault is a virtuous creed.
*Proverbs 24:16-18 For a just man falleth seven times, and riseth up again: but the wicked shall fall into mischief. Rejoice not when thine enemy falleth, and let not thine heart be glad when he stumbleth: Lest the Lord see it, and it displease him, and he turn away his wrath from him. April 8, 2024 2nd place, "Babel, Bait, Blame, Blank Check" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet; judged on 4/10/2024

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Date: 4/12/2024 3:19:00 AM
Deep insight! To err is human. All of us are likely to make mistake, but admitting it and taking the resolve not to repeat it is divine. Through this beautiful Quatern, you have expounded a solid ethical code. Congratulations dear Beata on your win.
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:39:00 AM
outstanding poem! A great contest entry as well. I enjoyed the first line till the last one. Such insight and retrospection followed with the wisdom gleaned from blaming. Nicely done!
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