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Blackjack Senryu String

I came here to win. I need a lucky shuffle. I want some blackjacks. Here is my money. I hope you’re better this time. Please, no surprises. You were not too kind to me the last time around. I need some winners. Here is my first bet. Let’s go, I’m ready to win. Please be nice to me. A two and a nine. I would like to double down. Give me something big. It’s a measly four! I hope you’re going over. Twenty-two or more! What’s under your six? I hope you will bust for me. And you have a ten. Please bust your sixteen in order to let me win. You’re going over! And you pull a five! That amounts to twenty-one. And you made me lose! Well, no more of that! Here’s some more of my money. You be nice to me! A ten and a five. And you have a six showing. You’re going over. I will stand pat here. I think you will bust this time. Let me win this one! You must have sixteen A big ten is under there. Won’t you bust for me? An ace underneath! So you have a seventeen, and I lose again! Well, no more of that! I’ll double my bet this time. I need some winners. An ace and a ten! You have a blackjack for me! Thank you very much! Why don’t you pay me? Oh, so you have an ace up Who needs insurance? I need half my bet to be paid even money? No, you don’t have it. A king under there! And you have blackjack also! And that is a push! Let’s try it again. You owe me for some winners. Give me lucky cards. A ten and a four, and you’re showing a nine up. I must take a hit. A big ten for me. I busted and lost again! Forget it today!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/29/2011 5:39:00 PM
I love Blackjack!!! Haven't played in a while!!! But I love it!!! Very well written!!!Christine
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:15:00 PM
Another good write that hits home my friend... Need good people around you at the table to have a real chance... Two good movies come to mind.. "21" of course and "Rounders" poker movie...is another... enjoyed your work today...
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Date: 1/28/2011 2:56:00 PM
True write of gambler's plight..Robert.. great set of Senryu's on the blackjack theme and card game .. win or lose it is exciting to try your hand at lady luck... straight up my friend..if u don't play u can't win.. luv these my friend.. happy weekend..
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Date: 1/28/2011 12:26:00 PM
lol... a sharp write on card games, robert... fascinating development of plot! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/28/2011 12:08:00 PM
Interesting work...Don't play cards so sort of lost on the work..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2011 11:13:00 AM
Sometimes you just can't win for losing,right? well done ..love,Deb
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