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This poem on the "Black Witch" is actually part of a greater epic narrative poem I am also presently working on mainly in free verse that concerns a medieval witch in Central Germany (named "Rosalia"), who has her Witches' Coven in the Harz Mountains near the Brocken Summit.  For this particular effort, I've formatted this current poem into nine quatrains so as to compete in the upcoming ABAB WITCHCRAFT Poetry Contest to be held on September 4, 2014.  (Gary Bateman - August 19, 2014)

Born and raised as a little child in a Witches’ coven, the Black Witch was indeed a very precocious child whose hell-spawned soul was seared in Hell’s oven, and like Medusa herself was a creature gone wild. The Black Witch had a craggy, malevolent demeanor and at a glance was stark, sinister, menacing and unholy, with jet black snake-like hair making her even meaner; she was a reincarnated spirit dispelling all things good and holy. The Black Witch was imbued with uncanny, unearthly powers and had dark probing eyes and exceptional sensory perception, and a bulbous, bile-ridden black wart was prominent among her powers, and protruded close to the tip of her nose from the time of her conception. She used the bile, putrid liquid extracted from her black wart to capture and poison and corrupt the life essence of her victims—if they resisted; she acutely honed her pagan skills in the Black Arts to the highest rapture while using her Gorgon-grimaced face to strike fear in all who resisted. As the most favored disciple and mistress of the Dark One, the Black Witch possessed a withering and wicked mesmerizing gaze used masterfully to corrupt and control souls for the Dark One, dooming her victims forever to a land with an impenetrable haze. The Black Witch brewed alchemic poisonous potions to a hideous effect, using them to startle, stun and paralyze her victims with unending fear while unmercifully taunting and tormenting them with equal evil effect, using Witchcraft to destroy once innocent souls and harvest fear. Intoning “Our Father, which wert in Heaven,” the Black Witch began her Black Mass sessions with spirited evil and debauchery, conjuring terrifying dreams and consigning victims to a black pitch all the while laughing and reveling in all the evil and debauchery. The Black Witch delighted in being “The Devil’s Concubine” by name, for her liaisons with Lucifer made her omnipotent and devoutly unholy. Her unbridled sense of power and invincibility was the Black Witch’s aim, for this fed her conviction to do vicious and evil things—to be unholy. To know the Black Witch was to realize a gorgonesque damnation forever while she pursued the unholy glorification of her master—Lucifer. The Black Witch was granted the power of all hell-spawned demons forever to support and consummate her unholy activities in the name of Lucifer. Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (August 19, 2014) (Rhymed Quatrain)

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Date: 10/24/2014 11:54:00 AM
a fine piece of writing gary very beautifully painted on the canvas smiling
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/24/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thanks Liam!! This one is definitely not a romance poem. Glad you took the time to read it Mate!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 9/9/2014 8:03:00 PM
Very descriptive and interestingly intriguing. I enjoyed this work so very much. Keeps you on your seat waiting for what's coming next. Thank you for sharing this awesome story. Have a great day, Sharon G.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 9/9/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thank You Sharon for taking the time to read this rather grim poem. This one is on the very dark side of Halloween. If you're interested, I should be releasing very soon a series of sequential installments of an epic narrative poem on "Rosalia - The Evil Witch of the Harz." I developed the Black Witch from this work. Thanks!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 9/4/2014 4:01:00 PM
This was so nicely written, descriptive and artful in every way. You are quite the storyteller. . I will be back to read this another time. Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/4/2014 11:20:00 PM
I will be looking forward to that, Gary. I will also be reading more of your work on here! Thank you for the kind review on my work. ~Laura
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Gary Bateman
Date: 9/4/2014 6:10:00 PM
Laura, Same Same pn my end. I just read one of your poems. Within the next two or so weeks, I will be releasing in separate sections a very long epic poem on "Rosalia - The Evil Witch of the Harz," from whence I formed the current poem "Black Witch." Rosalia is an epic narrative. It is a frightening read, but Good Triumphs in the end. Cheers, Gary
Date: 9/3/2014 10:57:00 AM
:) LINDA
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Date: 9/2/2014 11:46:00 AM
Gary, yes I noticed, the foreign language. You are a wise poet, I sense as well.. keep enjoying the soup, and life..Linda
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Gary Bateman
Date: 9/2/2014 12:47:00 PM
Absolutely Linda!!! -- Gary
Date: 9/2/2014 9:43:00 AM
Muchas Gracis, sounds beautiful... Linda
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Gary Bateman
Date: 9/2/2014 11:30:00 AM
I'm a foreign language type Linda as you've probably already figured out. All of us come to the poetry muse through similar and different doors. Gene Bourne told me he's poetry "metric" man because he plays the piano. A musician. I'm a linguist by training among other skills. It's interesting to see where all of us come from. So many very smart, energized people!! All the Best, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations Gary .....Seren
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Seren. I will check out your poems too in the future. Cheers, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations Gary on this well penned win... Verlena
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 3:48:00 PM
Thanks so much Verlena. Cheers, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Gary for a wonderful well-deserved win! Excellent write - great story!Pandita
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Pandita!! And likewise, best wishes on your win and most excellent poem. I look forward to staying in touch. Cheers, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 10:48:00 AM
Hi Gary, this one was the best, in my opinion. Congrats, SKAT
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 3:55:00 PM
Hi SKAT . . . You are so kind with your comment!! Thanks for taking the time to read "Black Witch." I am currently working on a longer epic narrative version of this poem under a different title. I hope to post it, if it isn't too long. Look forward to reading your works as well. Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 9:41:00 AM
Gary, a wonderful win...Linda
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 4:06:00 PM
Muchas Gracis Linda!! Thanks for reading the "Black Witch" and for regularly staying in touch. Cheers, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 9:41:00 AM
This was so well thought out, researched, I am surprised that it isn't higher on the list of winners. It should have been above my own, but I do see the excellence! Well done! Congrats to you!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Carrie!! and my sincere congratulations to you for your win and success in the contest. I quickly glanced at everyone's poems who placed in the contest and am in the process of reviewing them again more thoroughly. I write on multiple themes but do enjoying penning the Dark Ones too!! Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 9:14:00 AM
Very impressive Gary ! Congrats on ur huge win!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Upma!! I look forward to reading your works as well. All the Best, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 8:22:00 AM
Well done, you have the hair rising on the back of my neck. Congratulations.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Richard. And best wishes on your deserved win too with "Witch's Treedom"!! I'm glad "Black Witch" was "hair-raising experience" for you. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 8/28/2014 1:38:00 AM
excellent write Gary and I look forward to seeing the narrative poem when it is complete. Many congratulations on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/29/2014 6:03:00 PM
Jan -- thanks for letting me know this. I didn't realize it could be posted in continuing parts, but this does make sense. And so, get ready!! -- it will be flying out to everyone via a witch's broom online in the near future!! The longer version allows for a detailed character build out and for an articulation of the epic Good (Light) vs. Bad (Dark) themes. Cheers, Gary
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 6:37:00 PM
As a premium member you can post longer poems but just post it in several parts if need be so we can see the finished work:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/28/2014 6:33:00 PM
Hello Jan, Thanks so much for your note!!! The bigger epic narrative poem is still under construction, but if there is space enough to post it later when I finish it, I will. It's one that I want to move toward publication later if I possible. I look forward to reading your works too Jan. All the best, Gary
Date: 8/20/2014 9:56:00 PM
gary, as i was reading your replies, i read that this poem is part of a larger epic poem you hope to publish. i hope that you are successful in your endeavor i will keep my fingers crossed for you.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/21/2014 2:44:00 AM
Maurice, that's really nice of you to mention. I do appreciate your words of encouragement. The epic piece of this witch's tale is not just the evil side, but the good side. Be assured that in the end the "GOOD" will triumph and Rosalia (The Black Witch) will be destroyed. The epic poem is centered the Harz Mountains here in Germany that has a strong tradition of ancient witchcraft. Cheers, Gary
Date: 8/20/2014 7:10:00 PM
I am thinking this is for the contest? If so, it should do well. It is very well written.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/20/2014 9:29:00 PM
Yes Connie -- it is for the Witchcraft ABAB contest on 4 September. I am sure that some of the other contestants will have some gory tales too. Thanks for reading it!! Best Regards, Gary
Date: 8/20/2014 6:07:00 PM
excellent write. thank you.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/20/2014 9:32:00 PM
Maurice, Thanks for your note and for taking the time to read my rather grim tale here. I equally look forward to reading your works too. Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 8/20/2014 4:24:00 PM
How horrible!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/20/2014 5:16:00 PM
Ayesha, Thanks for your short comment. It's supposed to be horrible since it's a poem on Witchcraft. I wrote it for the upcoming Witchcraft ABAB Contest. Good to hear from you. Cheers, Gary
Date: 8/20/2014 1:37:00 PM
- Gary, this must be the evil witch - really well written! - A whole story you tell so talented! - I am impressed !!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/20/2014 5:20:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise . . . I will keep you posted. Like many of us, I have a number of simultaneous projects. But it's good to be busy -- Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/20/2014 2:20:00 PM
- Good luck in the contest and with the publication - // A-L
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/20/2014 2:17:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Thanks for your super note and comments!!! Appreciate your review. This piece for the upcoming Witchcraft ABAB Contest is a derivative of a much larger epic poem I've been working and want to publish eventually about "Rosalia - The Evil Witch from the Harz." Rosalia is this Black Witch. Cheers, Gary
Date: 8/19/2014 4:57:00 PM
Wow, you did this great! This would make an awesome contest entry for the witchcraft contest, Great reading this Gary. :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/20/2014 10:30:00 AM
Hello Casarah, Thank you so much for your very kind words and comments. I'm glad you liked this poem on the Black Witch. I still have to touch up a few things with this poem before the contest day. I will certainly check your poems out as well. I've only been a member with PoetrySoup now about three weeks or so. Thanks again for contacting me. Best Wishes, Gary

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