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Black Velvet

my cloak of darkness blanket of night covers fear black velvet comfort wrapped tightly in falling sky silver starlight warms my soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/13/2012 10:16:00 PM
wow, now here is one gorgeous tanka I somehow never saw before!!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 5:47:00 PM
You too?...I love to walk at night under a starlit sky and draw close to God...Such a pressure valve reliever! Hope your Sabbath was a good one, Rhonda...I can't recall if I told u that I Soup Mail'd ya yesterday....Check'er out. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:59:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your great expressive work..I hope just a work and not from a depressive mood..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was very uplifting..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2012 10:22:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your Tanka tonight Rhonda, I especially love the ending, love Wilma
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Date: 6/3/2012 4:55:00 AM
Beautiful tanka poem Rhonda, well doen! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:55:00 AM
Rhonda great tanka..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 9:30:00 PM
A beautiful tanka this evening, and a beautiful evening.
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