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Ghazal
A poetic form consisting of couplets that share a rhyme and a refrain. The couplets have lines of 10 syllables (Including the refrain). The refrain can be a word or a phrase. There is internal rhyming in line 1 and 2, and line 2 of each couplet with the refrain. Each couplet should be able to stand alone. There is no limit to the number of couplets in a Ghazal. However, a min. of five stanzas is required. The poet may insert their name in the last line.

 

The streets are set on fire, black lives matter, though things are looking dire, black lives matter. Through aggressive force and senseless killings police have raised black ire, black lives matter. In riot gear cops attack the crowds, and batons fuel gunfire, black lives matter. Blacks and whites marching for equality, set the nation afire, black lives matter. Despite the blood a black family spills, death's what bigots require, black lives matter. A black man shot in the back seven times ignited a bonfire, black lives matter. When white cops suddenly start shooting blacks panic spreads like wildfire, black lives matter. There's so much hate in white America that it may well backfire, black lives matter. Remember Hitler's far-right agenda, Jews burnt behind barbed wire, black lives matter. Examine the foundations of your faith, my voice leads the choir, black lives matter. (Ghazal) 08/31/2020 Ghazal Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 10/4/2020 12:54:00 PM
Well penned, congratulations on your win
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/5/2020 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Paghunda, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/3/2020 5:03:00 AM
This is brilliant and a great take on the ghazal.. I agree with your message, sad so many do not understand the point of it... The last stanza, is incorrect in regards to your syllable count, but still a great ghazal.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2020 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so much S.O., I appreciate the placement and have corrected the syllable count in the last stanza my friend, Emile.

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