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Snow cat
 Black white
You freeze
You blend
Bare branch
Dark, light
Snow,stones
I wait
Eyes glow
Breath puffs
Earth blends
One form
Tricks eye
Frost, ice
sticks bend
Earth moves
You turn
Freeze frame 
Eyes strain
Breath puffs
rise first
You lurch
branch boughs
stones, snow
Still life

Picture 2
For S.O United Colors Black and White Challenge

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 11:32:00 AM

Suz. Congratulations on your awesome Black and White united theme win. Love LINDA

daver austin

Date: 3/11/2016 4:54:00 PM

Still life, like a bowl of dominoes. Interesting. daver

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 7:23:00 PM

Thanks Daver: always so good to see you. SuZ

Jo Daniel

Date: 3/11/2016 6:53:00 AM

Snow cat very beautifully portrayed through your words:) congratulations on your win:)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 7:28:00 PM

Thanks Jo: This was my first try at this form. Sure is interesting working within limits. Cheers, SuZ

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/10/2016 7:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Suzanne :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 2:01:00 PM

Thanks so much for taking time to read comment. Always appreciated . Hugs, SuZ

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2016 1:26:00 PM

Yes...it's the snow leopard in action! Very descriptive and entertaining write, Suzanne. Congratulations on this merited win! ~ Regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 1:55:00 PM

Dear Paul: Thanks so much for taking time to comment. Always valued. Best, SuZ

Sarita Milliner

Date: 3/10/2016 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Suzanne!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 1:56:00 PM

Thanks Sarita: I appreciate you taking time to read and comment. Cheers, SuZ

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/10/2016 10:55:00 AM

Congrats for your fine placement SuZ

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 7:25:00 PM

Thank you, Victor : I appreciate you taking time to read and comment. Cheers, SuZ

Iris Elizabeth Sankey-Lewis

Date: 3/10/2016 7:52:00 AM

Is this from experience? May you win; sharing this inspiring gem.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/11/2016 7:27:00 PM

Hi Iris: Not a personal encounter but I have seen wildlife documentaries that bring you up close.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/9/2016 5:16:00 PM

Hello Suzanne ... your poem certainly presents to the photo well. Nicely written - Lindsay

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/9/2016 5:27:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay. How nice to have you visit. I appreciate your comment. Did you read about my Wedding day. It happened in Australia. cheers, SuZ

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 3/8/2016 6:04:00 PM

I like the two syllable lines, the poem reads quickly. There is a documentary (of some years ago) that captures the elusive snow leopard.Thank you for stopping by read by turtle poem. I write many animal and insect poems in which I give these creatures a human personality. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 7:11:00 PM

Thanks Maurice: I will check out some more poems soon. SuZ

Eve Roper

Date: 3/8/2016 2:11:00 PM

Excellent write, Suzanne, a 7! Good luck in the contest :-)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 7:10:00 PM

Thanks Eve: I appreciate your comments. SuZ

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/8/2016 9:22:00 AM

Excellent--paints a vivid picture! Janice

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 10:30:00 AM

Thanks Janice.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/7/2016 11:26:00 PM

A lovely poem. Choosing the best is going to be tough for SO. GL with yours.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 1:31:00 AM

Yes, I agree, Victor: The color contests are popular and fun. Cheers, SuZ

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/7/2016 10:22:00 PM

You captured the snow leopard on her stealthy prowl. I could hear the branches snap beneath her paws. Very nicely done. It is a rather majestic creature ... I don't believe there are many that exists.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 1:30:00 AM

Sad but true. Also true of many fine species despite efforts to protect them. Glad you enjoyed it. SuZ

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/7/2016 9:29:00 PM

Great black and white on picture 2, Suzanne! I did a similar one, with similar words, which is interesting to me. Good luck in the contest :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 1:25:00 AM

Thanks Laura: I checked yours out. Amazing that we started with the same line....snow cat. GL in the contest. These color ones fill fast. SuZ

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/7/2016 5:09:00 PM

I was beginning to think no one else chose the Snow Leopard SuZ. I love the way you capture her in still frame. I can see her foggy breath! GL to you too SuZ.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/8/2016 1:27:00 AM

Thanks Connie: writing to pictures is almost as much fun as writing to words lists. It takes you in a direction you may not go, otherwise. Take care.bHugs, SuZ