Black and White

Contrast of cupcakes
decorated with vanilla frosting
and Spring flowers.

A New York City girl -
I say girl, she’s eighty-five,
yet she swivels those hips; and her lips
are flaming cherub swords, feisty with grace.

Her friend, arrives for the final act,
in black and white, so elegant.
Her sleeves flowing, skirt swirling,
bestowing bows and arcs.

The lithe dance,
like a ballet,
uninhibited yet pure.

A Holy Spirited spitfire
engages her friend in the hot seat.

Legends’ made in such corners
of the world, contesting to fullness of life,
the contrast of light and shadows,
black and white.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kauffman Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim! Knowing this is based on a true story gives is a very special, very endearing, quality. Blessings for Holy Week!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Sam! Blessings to you!
Ashley Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Dear Kim, I adore the feisty yet tender spirit of this poem. Great imagery entices the imagination. I especially enjoyed "A Holy Spirited spitfire" - hell ya! Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Thank you, Susan! Love that you enjoyed the feisty spirit! I have very sweet and “Spirited” friends! So blessed!
Empress Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 11:59 AM
Dear kim, what a refreshing take on black and white, love the flow of your storytelling and how youv depicted the contrast between light and shadows black and white in such an effortlessly engaging manner, pleasure reading this, i wish to be like this 80 year old girl oneday. :) congratulations on your win. Loved this
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, Ink! So glad you liked it!
Beaufort Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Kim, I had to read this several times and appreciate the differences between the two friends. It's a pleasure to read a description that includes a salute to differences. Take care!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Thank you! I appreciate you :)
Rolland Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 7:42 AM
enjoyed the originality and friendly company, this is so subtle and refreshing, bravo Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Thank you, Yann! I appreciate you!
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 12:57 PM
- A lovely "girl" who knows how to appreciate life - when you are eighty-five years old you know "the contrast of light and shadows, black and white", Kim :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Thank you! I appreciate you, Anne-Lise! :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Kim, what a gentle, lovely story of loving friendship. Love the phrase "Holy Spirited spitfire!" Is this a true story? Best wishes for the contest. Lenten blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Blessings to you, Sam! Yes, happened last week! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Indeed life is always with contrasts. We must never give up and choose wisely. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Indeed! Thank you, Victor! Hugs
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:10 PM
The contrast of dark and light as it plays the role is the crux. Sorry was away from the site from a long time, so was not able to read and review. Best regards
Rodrigues Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Glad you are back! Hope all is well.
Maverick Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:32 PM
How intruiging Kim..All the best with this If for a contest." B t w I have mailed you I hope thats ok?
Rodrigues Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:00 PM
glad you found it intriguing. I have emailed you back. No problem at all.
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