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Black Eyed-Susan went out to play making new friends day after day; in the garden they would wear golden ribbons in their hair and gaily perform a ballet.

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Date: 8/1/2022 8:29:00 PM
Black eyed Susie's are such pretty, cheery flowers. A dear friend and neighbor who has long since passed on, loved these flowers. I enjoyed reading this! Also the added photo is beautiful. Is it a picture of your garden?
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/2/2022 11:14:00 AM
Hi Anne, thanks for stopping by to read my poem.Black-eyed- Susans bring so much joy and for you render memories, of your dear friend~and yes, they line the edge of my garden, which bring me so much joy everyday. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 8/1/2022 8:03:00 AM
How sweet this is Paulette. I can’t seem to write even one. This flower is one of summer’s brightest gifts. Your poem is delightful! Blessings xxoo
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/1/2022 8:06:00 AM
So glad to know your found my poem "delightful".....Black-eyed-Susans are so happy; they light up my garden. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 7/31/2022 6:21:00 PM
This is so nice, Paulette!! I'm dubbing it a 'Lyrical Limerick!' Sweet. :) gw
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/1/2022 8:04:00 AM
Glad you like it~the brightness of Black-eyed-Susans fills my garden in a 'lyrical' glow. :)Paulette
Date: 7/31/2022 10:18:00 AM
Lovely limerick. Black eyed Susan are love flowers.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/31/2022 4:15:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 7/31/2022 7:53:00 AM
Ahh!! A beautiful scene. I enjoyed this one today. My spirit was aloft from your visit to my poem. Sara
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/31/2022 8:09:00 AM
HI Sara, they are beautiful, especially en mass~ they lift my spirits too. Happy Sunday! :)Paulette
Date: 7/30/2022 7:05:00 AM
Very sweet, Paulette ~ my 'black-eyed' susan limerick didn't end as well ~ lol
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/30/2022 7:50:00 AM
Line, thank you....oh dear, sorry to hear your 'black-eyed-susan' had a tragic ending. LOL. :)Paulette
Date: 7/30/2022 5:14:00 AM
This is such a great creative Limerick. I enjoyed, :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/30/2022 6:03:00 AM
Flowers inspire me and en mass they are delightful. :)Paulette
Date: 7/29/2022 12:14:00 PM
Aw, this is really delightful, Paulette. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/30/2022 6:04:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Milton. I don't usually write limericks but when I saw the mass of black-eyed-susans in my garden I couldn't help myself. LOL. :)Paulette
Date: 7/29/2022 10:35:00 AM
Simply delightful Paulette with "golden ribbons" and a "ballet!" In the summer black-eyed susans pop up along western highways and even grow abundantly into the desert! Many thanks for your lovely dance into summer's beauty! Blessings!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/30/2022 6:05:00 AM
So happy you felt delight~flowers seem to do that. Have a great week-end. :)Paulette
Date: 7/29/2022 10:02:00 AM
Wonderfully idyllic, summery and so delightful Panagiota xxx
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/30/2022 6:06:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the "summery" feel, but it is the time of year. Hope you are enjoying your summer. :)Paulette

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