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Once in dream I did trace, a spider came out of the old clock clinging time, crawled on face. Got up afraid, web on face, in mirror I saw, engraved, Image, I knew was of age. Once in dream I did trace web on face, in mirror I saw , age. September 21, 2020 Contest : Let's Minichu On Bizarre Sponsor : Mohan Chutani

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Date: 9/30/2020 5:59:00 AM
I'm afraid, in time, that web will be attacking me :) Congrats on the placement Subimal! Linda
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Date: 9/30/2020 3:36:00 AM
Subimal. Thanks for participating in my contest. You got it fine except the middle line rhyme sync. of each stanza. Would hv been placed higher but for that. Congrats. Mohan.
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Date: 9/21/2020 4:29:00 AM
A genuine, brilliant masterpiece. I love it. God bless you with many, many more
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