Bizarre

I danced with crabs that night as scores of rabbits, piglets, chickens, dogs and cats took to flight. They waved at me, all wearing little party hats, you see. I'm blue - I thinking that's true. I danced with crabs that night, all wearing little party hats. True? written 15th September for Mohan's Minichu contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2020 4:03:00 AM

I realized I never came back with congrats. Way to go. Are your toes still sore or did you have on shoes? Congrats on your win. Way to go. Sara

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/30/2020 9:01:00 AM

This is a great piece for this contest!! Congratulations on your Top Win in the contest, Jack!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2020 6:12:00 AM

Love this, Jack! Congratulations on first place!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/30/2020 5:20:00 AM

Quite the picture of bizarre Jack. Very creative. Congratulations on top win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 9/30/2020 4:28:00 AM

Jack, partying with crabs and other animals; a bizarre animal kingdom party. thanx for participating. Top placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2020 12:25:00 PM

Was you jumping around trying to avoid their pinchers??Enjoyed reading your work ..Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara..Thanks for all the visits.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/18/2020 12:51:00 AM

Entertaining and surreal! Reminds me of someone running away from bureaucracy:) Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/17/2020 2:44:00 AM

Hi Jack I found this poem such fun - it was like a Dr.Seuss story. - best wishes for the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2020 2:47:00 PM

most bizarre jack was this written after a night with whisky Michael lol, thanks for the giggle:-) hugs jan xx