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Minichu
Invented by Mohan Chutani, a total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1. 

Fish falling from the sky there's not a cloud, it's a perfect robin egg blue, fish don't fly. Sometimes in fogs, nature is known to drop a few live frogs. In range, but bizarre’s too strange! Live fish fall from the sky nature is known to drop a few, strange! (Minichu) 09/04/2020

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Date: 10/12/2020 4:15:00 AM
I have heard of this but never seen it. Creative use of the idea with this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/12/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2020 6:18:00 AM
Love the imagery of bizarre droppings from the sky! Add to the list tornadic cows. Congratulations, my friend!
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2020 5:34:00 AM
Perfect entry Emile. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2020 4:10:00 AM
Emile, thanx for participating. Yes, read about this bizarre incident sometime back in papers. fine placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:29:00 AM
Thanks Mohan, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/4/2020 7:16:00 AM
Such is the reality in this world, mysteries abound my friend. Very interesting poetry form- one you nailed... God bless...
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Date: 9/4/2020 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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