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Bittersweet

Love is a bittersweet pill ~ Never noticed it Time getting the best of us Stealth snuck right past us Where have the years gone Never thought the journey’d end Now it’s in plain sight I want to slow time Yet see us getting older How can we let go There’s no denying A lifetime is not enough Wish we could rewind Submitted on May 5, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE 4 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION and on June 20, 2019 for contest MULTIPLE HAIKU sponsored by JAMIE PAN

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Date: 7/22/2019 9:19:00 AM
Life is strange, a turn of a page... we only read once, never twice... Great writing Line, salute alkas
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Date: 7/22/2019 10:37:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Alkas.
Date: 7/21/2019 6:59:00 PM
Oh, that last stanza pierces to the root!!! Dangerous territory too. :) gw
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Date: 7/21/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 7/21/2019 7:10:00 AM
We so do want a re-do sometimes.
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Date: 7/21/2019 7:16:00 AM
Don't we though?! Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 7/20/2019 8:31:00 AM
This well-written poem really resonates with me, line! Janice
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Date: 7/20/2019 10:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Janice.

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