Notes About The Poem

Biting Into Fall

September always brings me back
to my early childhood
that innocent naïve excitement
when butterflies fluttered free

Summer over and cool weather reminiscent
of adventures and school days
new skirt and knee highs 
new books and teachers

The unknown ahead
biting into growing up
into learning 
and into life



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:59 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Line congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Thanks, Constance. Most appreciated.
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:34 AM
Line loved this! Congratulations on your win!;)
Gauthier Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Thanks, Brenda. Most appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 9:14 PM
I can't describe why I like this so much, especially the line 'biting into life,' --- but I really, really do. It strikes a chord deep within me. (Maybe it's that this is the first September in 30 years that I'm not returning to school)… Thanks, Line. Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 11:28 PM
OMG you are due for a break. Take the whole year off, Gershon!
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