Biting Into Fall

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September always brings me back to my early childhood that innocent naïve excitement when butterflies fluttered free Summer over and cool weather reminiscent of adventures and school days new skirt and knee highs new books and teachers The unknown ahead biting into growing up into learning and into life AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on September 13, 2019 for contest FALL INTO FALL sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2019 12:59:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/24/2019 2:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Constance La France

Date: 9/24/2019 12:38:00 PM

Line congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/24/2019 2:31:00 PM

Thanks, Constance. Most appreciated.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/23/2019 1:34:00 AM

Line loved this! Congratulations on your win!;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/23/2019 6:38:00 PM

Thanks, Brenda. Most appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/15/2019 9:14:00 PM

I can't describe why I like this so much, especially the line 'biting into life,' --- but I really, really do. It strikes a chord deep within me. (Maybe it's that this is the first September in 30 years that I'm not returning to school)… Thanks, Line. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2019 11:28:00 PM

OMG you are due for a break. Take the whole year off, Gershon!