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Birth In Storm

So storms the night wind through the vane Summoning the sounds of howling beasts Assailing all that stands above and tall Like chimney tops and stately green pines Will not reveal the source of crashing down Until the break of dawn and cloudless sky They venture forth to survey the havoc done Sun rising like nothing in the dawn amiss. At first all seems well to the roving eye Until closer inspection finds a neighbor’s cat Hunkered down beneath the lower portico Having given birth to seven yellow tabbies Unalarmed by the threats of recent hail And nursing contentedly at mother’s breasts. Written April 21, 2021 N/A "All Yours" Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/21/2021 11:20:00 AM
HelloMiton, well i hope mother and kittens make it to shore. I feel badly for the mother and kittens. Enjoy your dasy my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/21/2021 3:35:00 PM
Hello Milton, and a very well written fiction. I enjoyed it. Have a good evening my friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/21/2021 1:41:00 PM
Purely fiction, Darlene, so I'm sure they will. Thanks so much for your sweet, gentle comments.
Date: 4/21/2021 8:48:00 AM
Yes...even the howling of the storms...a gentle birth is born...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/21/2021 10:06:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and your kind and thoughtful comment, Arturo.
Date: 4/21/2021 8:01:00 AM
Such beauty in the birth of animals and humans alike, They are so much braver then we are, when it comes to giving life. Beautifully portrayed, I neve did get the hang of blank verse, but you did it well.:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/21/2021 8:11:00 AM
True, Mystic Rose Rose. You should give blank verse a try. Once you get the rhythm down, it flows rather nicely. Thanks for your thoughtful comment.

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