Birds the Word - Tetractys

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Hawk Takes flight Regal sight Hunter Supreme Melodramatic scene, takes baby lamb Pigeons on rooftop peruse the ground Gentle beak taps Seek food scraps Hear their Coo Dove Pure white Enters clouds Splendorous flight Spreads a veil of delicate lacey shrouds The squawk of the sea gull. It darts and glides Fisherman's catch It will steal Birds eye Meal Poor Peahen Drab and grey Background to stay Her mate’s amazing colorful display The wisest of them all, the mighty owl Sits in a tree It calls who Disguise Wise

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/8/2023 12:18:00 AM

Hang on - cop a load of these Pidgeons they are pigeons over here but I presume the extra D is another tribute to me? :D

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/8/2023 12:40:00 AM

You just keep getting smarter don't you !!!!! I'll have to put you on the payroll soon I guess.. Thanks D. Your spell checking is "Superb" :) (you know I make all these mistakes to keep you busy don't you ?)

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/7/2023 9:19:00 PM

Superb!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 12:17:00 AM

I was being discreet!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/7/2023 10:01:00 PM

What would I do without you, my wonderful guardian Angel. You are a human dictionary ! What SPELL CHECK misses Dilly Dally picks up. Thanx D.