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Sky-Showcased Teamwork

As feathered fowls* mentioned by the Scriptures They are God’s wondrous creatures bound by flock-cultures Possessing marvelously unique features Blessed to triumph along flight freedom-ventures. Enthralled with their displayed teamwork at full sight My heart thanks the Creator Who upholds their migratory plight Beautifying the sky in their V-formation of magnificent delight As pelicans prevail through "upwash vortex fields" midst celestial light I marvel to see such birds praise the Designer of great magnificence Who allows them to showcase their flying might with grace-iridescence Inspiring humankind through their lovely presence That exalts the Lord along environment’s license!
Psalm 50:11 I (God) know all the fowls of the mountains: and the wild beasts of the field are mine. Psalm 78:27 ... and feathered fowls like as the sand of the sea. January 27, 2019 Edited on October 4, 2022 1st place, "A Flock of Birds" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward; Judged on 10/6/2022.

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Date: 10/8/2022 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on First Place, Beata! Your poem is indeed a lovely prayer of thanksgiving.
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Date: 10/7/2022 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations kabayan... So inspiring and empowering...
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:54:00 PM
Congrats to you, Beata. "Designer of great magnificence". Great work.
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Date: 10/6/2022 12:47:00 PM
A lovely write! Congratulations on first place win, Beata!
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on this awesome win Beata. :) Linda
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