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Oh, birds of sunset sing me a duet and just let me drift for sundown is swift . . . My day has been twined with many a forest way, it all began with a bright sun high and ablaze; yes, so delightful was the deep forest maze, now soft are the sun rays. Oh, birds of sunset sing me a duet and just let me drift for sundown is swift . . . So beautiful is the warmth of a sun fading, such joy, I found myself in a cool stream wading; and charming the melodies of birds in the shading, I rest in a vast meadow, my hair braiding. Oh, birds of sunset sing me a duet and just let me drift for sundown is swift . . . Soon, I lay myself down in a carpet of green, the sun is falling and what a breathtaking scene; I fall asleep bathed in a golden sun serene; to the lullaby of a hundred birds unseen. Oh, birds of sunset sing me a duet and just let me drift for sundown is swift . . . and just let me drift for sundown is swift . . . . _________________________________ March 20, 2018 Poetry/Lyric/Lullaby/Birds of Sunset Copyright Protected, ID 18-1005-378-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Lullaby in the Sunset sponsor, Vermillian Scythe Tenth Place

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Date: 4/9/2018 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win.
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Date: 4/8/2018 10:31:00 PM
Lovely, BW. A beautiful read.
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Date: 4/5/2018 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful peaceful lullaby. I enjoyed it, relaxing.
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:36:00 PM
Excellent write , Broken Wings, ...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/4/2018 7:08:00 PM
Very pretty, Constance. I like the repeated refrain. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/4/2018 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful and freeing poem BW. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:10:00 PM
what a dreamy poem Constance and the picture is the perfect accompaniment to your lyrics:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2018 6:31:00 PM
You really wrote something special with this one. Love the idea of a bird duet.
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