Notes About The Poem

Image result for falling asleep at sunset

Birds of Sunset - Lullaby

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

My day has been twined with many a forest way,
it all began with a bright sun high and ablaze;
yes, so delightful was the deep forest maze,
now soft are the sun rays.

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

So beautiful is the warmth of a sun fading,
such joy, I found myself in a cool stream wading;
and charming the melodies of birds in the shading,
I rest in a vast meadow, my hair braiding.

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

Soon, I lay myself down in a carpet of green,
the sun is falling and what a breathtaking scene;
I fall asleep bathed in a golden sun serene;
to the lullaby of a hundred birds unseen.

Oh, birds of sunset
sing me a duet
and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . 

and just let me drift
for sundown is swift . . . . 


_________________________________
March 20, 2018


Poetry/Lyric/Lullaby/Birds of Sunset
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1005-378-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Lullaby in the Sunset
sponsor, Vermillian Scythe

Tenth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/9/2018 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2018 10:31:00 PM
Lovely, BW. A beautiful read.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2018 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful peaceful lullaby. I enjoyed it, relaxing.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2018 9:36:00 PM
Excellent write , Broken Wings, ...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2018 7:08:00 PM
Very pretty, Constance. I like the repeated refrain. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2018 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful and freeing poem BW. Congratulations for your win :)
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2018 1:10:00 PM
what a dreamy poem Constance and the picture is the perfect accompaniment to your lyrics:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2018 6:31:00 PM
You really wrote something special with this one. Love the idea of a bird duet.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter