Birds of a Feather

I glanced out my window
by chance I did see
A small little finch
looking back right at me.

His feathers were yellow
all fluffed up and bright.
He sat for a moment and
then he took flight.

My mind took me with him
up high in the air.
How chilling, fulfilling
it felt to be there.

We flew over roof tops
and buildings and trees.
The wind moved us swiftly
along on the breeze.

We dove into the air
and went round and around.
Then just for a moment
our feet they touched down.

We stopped at the church
and perched high on it's Steeple.
Amazed at the site of all
the small people. 

Then after a rest-bit
we lifted again.
Flying high over rivers
and meadows and glens.

I took one deep breath
as we circled my town.
And gently, so gently
we finally touched ground.

I watched as he flew
away into the sky.
I waved and said Thank you
again and Good Bye.

This day I'll remember
for now and forever.
You see for a moment
we were Birds of a feather...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 21, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Sharon, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
Austin Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 12:18 PM
I like this for its childish quality - and - I love children's poetry. Congrats on the selection. daver
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April 16, 2013 at 7:44 AM
excellent write, a joy to read, makes one think spring is getting closer, well done., Gordon
Huffman Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 11:17 PM
a joy to read...very, very nice. thank you!
Smith Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Very imaginative.....one of your best yet.
Fraser Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Lovely little story Sharon, and finches are ever so cute. I could picture every stanza >> James
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October 18, 2010 at 6:31 PM
sounds nice to have a flight of fancy!! enjoyed the ride!
Mehta Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 5:09 PM
yes you have penned about the birds of the same feathers, enjoyed it, Sharon
A  Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 2:14 PM
such a beautiful and insightful write, enjoyed,,*LUV~SKAT
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