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Birds chatter as days get warm with sun melodies float hummingbirds flutter and bees buzz happy spiders spin their webs raindrops fall drip, drip, drip and the flowers bloom swaying in a Spring dance and birds chatter and tweet ____________________ April 10, 2022 (Repost) Poetry/Yalto/Verse/Birds Chatter Copyright Protected, ID 04-10 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Example for my Yalto Contest, December 06 - January 06, 2022

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Date: 12/16/2022 4:19:00 AM
fine example for your contest. I like the yalto, very plain but the poet can add alliteration, onomatopoeia (drip, drip, drip) for color and excitement. The biggest challenge for me was the one-syllable line - how to color it up a little while keeping specs intact.
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Date: 12/16/2022 9:50:00 AM
Reason, thank you so much for the visit and compliment. I like the Yalto form also, I find it is not too restrictive and gives the space to be creative, yes, those one syllables words are not easy, blessings
Date: 12/14/2022 9:22:00 AM
FINE. Liked Yalto form ‘ll try. Have good days.
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Date: 12/14/2022 7:17:00 PM
Anisha, thank you so much for the visit and comment, looking forward to reading your poem, blessings
Date: 12/7/2022 7:59:00 AM
Just gorgeous, Constance;-) I absolutely love your Yalto poem! Nicely done.
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Date: 12/7/2022 5:58:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment, that means a lot to me, blessings
Date: 12/7/2022 2:43:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance. Unfamiliar with this form, but anxious to give it a try...if I get my "MoGo" going. (lol) Charlie
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Date: 12/7/2022 5:59:00 PM
Charlie, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, blessings
Date: 12/7/2022 1:30:00 AM
This is so beautiful...Constance ! I feel a pleasant day with birdsongs, their tweeting and chattering, spiders weaving webs and flowers blooming .
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Date: 12/7/2022 5:59:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment and the compliment, blessings
Date: 12/6/2022 10:58:00 AM
This is a lovely verse, Constance, so well illustrating the Yalto form. I'm sure this will be a new form for some of the poets here on the Soup, but you should get some marvelous examples in your contest. Best wishes.
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Date: 12/7/2022 6:01:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, I think you are right, there will be many beautiful Yalto's entered in my contest, blessings