Birds

Songbirds fly above We can see the tips of their wings Hear their lovely songs

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2016 5:40:00 PM

very nice, Matt.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2016 4:06:00 PM

I like the combination of image and song, Matthew. Luckily I live in the country and thus get to enjoy many scenes like this one! Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2016 3:21:00 PM

Spring brings such lovely sounds and visions..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 4/11/2016 1:52:00 PM

Matthew, wonderful, as a lover of birds how could I not love your poem, 7 ~

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/10/2016 11:35:00 PM

I like the visual your haiku paints in this lovely poem, Matthew :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/10/2016 10:33:00 PM

Matthew, I think you made a typo in flay, don't you mean fly? This is a lovely vision that sings with spring's music. Is it for a contest? : )