Bird Brains

Saw two love birds arguing,
not a pretty flight – one flew
left while still holding on -- 
as the other persisted right;

the tree-trunk ahead held its ground...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 9:34 PM
Now, let me think: What does the tree-trunk represent? ~ Dyed-in-the-wool fuddy-duddy English Teacher. LOL.
DiMino Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 10:19 AM
I know, afraid when you read anything I write, myself mostly self educated. My guess, you know better than most of us, even the writer. I play drums, thinking often of Buddy Rich who sometimes struggled with articulation because he never learned to read music entirely. Lot of natural talent. One of the greatest.
One Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 1:25 PM
I know a few with bird brains, and a few cuckoos.... you always make me smile and always make me think with your poems... the problem with this world is that people dont look at themselves, so blame the other.... if only everyone had an open mind.. All the best my friend..
DiMino Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:04 AM
Open and avoided filling it with the usual garbage... Thank you, my friend. Have a great writing weekend!
George Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 9:28 AM
I have never seen love birds arguing. Instead they make love.l have always observed that they have marital fidelity. Once l had many lovebirds. They mate with only one chosen partner. If an intruder comes, they fight and drive it away. Quite an interesting poem. It made me smile.
DiMino Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 10:12 AM
All for smiles:) They avoid Phoenix altogether. Not a climate for even Love Birds.
Empress Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:54 AM
I might be like the arguing birdie haha. Made me smile! I needed this dear Joe! So deep and witty! Clever write! As always your poems are so very authentic and has that refreshing touch! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 8:24 AM
Thank you, Empress; just trying not to be so serious all the time. Everything does not have to have a profound message, as my wife tells me when she refuses to cook.
Maverick Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:30 PM
Did i have any imput to this write dear Brother Joe Dimino??? All blessings Forever.)))))) Its a good cun one btw.'
DiMino Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:11 AM
Hi Joe; we are all in it, part of the same Universal Brain. Who knows?
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 9:42 PM
Haha. Great twist
DiMino Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:12 AM
Just for fun. Thank you, Andrea.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 4:50 PM
wasn't expecting that ending! What a wonderful surprise. Faving.
DiMino Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Sara; made my day!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 8:42 AM
I  enjoyed reading your creative write. A tree-trunk as a rule will hold its ground. Have a fun day writing away.................
DiMino Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Hi Paula; just a silly fun write. Hope you are handling the heat alright. Really starting to get toasty out there.
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