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Bipolar Raindrops

Raindrops pattering cadence heart doth enthrall Anon, dripping residual with discordant notes pall Rhythm of tapping droplets cerebral chords trawl Guttural chorus of pinging beats on nerve ends crawl Continuous drizzle a soothing, therapeutic waterfall Nauseating dribble an agitating, redundant catcall Scintillating sprinkles glisten on translucent wall Spitting pellets congeal into hazy, brackish squall Frothy mist of cooling vapor wraps cleansing shawl Briny streams with transparent acid stealthily maul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/2/2012 12:01:00 PM
Wow, I like where you went with this, showing two sides of the same coin! Well done!! Congrats on your win...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 9/1/2012 11:17:00 AM
STEPHEN, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:47:00 PM
Certainly two different viewpoints. However it is true rain is sometimes a blessing and sometimes a dreadful curse. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:27:00 PM
I was captured by your title, and the images of rain did not disappoint. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/30/2012 2:35:00 PM
That was a really different write, well done, so original. I enjoyed this. Lee
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations Stephen a super win xx
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Stephen. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2012 7:56:00 PM
hey, way to monorhyme it, Stephen. Lots of good "sounds" in this one to set the tone for a bipolar rainfall!
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