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Bill's Fate

Bill swallowed two blue pills for his date As he wanted to please his new mate He then answered his phone Told his date was postponed As the swelling below made him faint

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2023 5:23:00 AM

LOL, love it - thanks very much for the win in your contest

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/5/2023 2:30:00 PM

Jack, thank you and you're welcome.

Paul Bell

Date: 5/21/2023 9:14:00 AM

Poor guy needs a hand, I understand. Wonder if she knew he was taking blue and thought herself, phew.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/21/2023 12:46:00 PM

Ha ha, thanks for your visit, Bill.

Valsa George

Date: 5/7/2023 8:48:00 PM

Ha.... ha! Sad indeed... ! Too much of enthusuiasm can land one into unforeseen difficulties. Bill's fate is a good example

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/8/2023 3:20:00 AM

Valsa, thank you.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/7/2023 5:59:00 AM

Hilarious Tania - Swallow two blue pills in haste, repent in displeasure…. Belle

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/7/2023 6:36:00 AM

Belle, thank you.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/7/2023 5:22:00 AM

pshawww...Bill ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/7/2023 6:56:00 AM

Congrats on that! I've transferred a few, too. It's a good bank.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/7/2023 5:52:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks for your visit, this was a gold winner on AP. I love the humor and decided to add to to PS as well.