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                                           adrenaline drip 

                                            street surfing

                                  white knuckle sweat spray
    




MagiCicada13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/16/2018 11:32:00 PM
You are the Haiku Queen, my dear. Nice one. :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/17/2018 7:49:00 AM
I wouldn't admit to being, but maybe a short form marvel ;) Thank you my friend <3 xomo!
Date: 9/14/2018 4:52:00 PM
Maybe another line could be "Bottled and shipped." But never mind me, I'm being inappropriate.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/15/2018 6:24:00 AM
You'd fit right in at an alleycat;)
Date: 9/14/2018 8:42:00 AM
White knuckles for sure, Maureen:)
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/14/2018 9:17:00 AM
Ya ;) xomo!
Date: 9/14/2018 7:38:00 AM
Sure is a white knuckle ride at times for cyclists and motorists:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/14/2018 7:52:00 AM
Especially in snow storms ;) xomo!
Date: 9/13/2018 2:44:00 AM
Amazing... I don't know how you crammed that much description into such a small poem, but it works!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/13/2018 7:57:00 AM
Hah! Thank you so much Rhona! :)) xomo!
Date: 9/12/2018 12:45:00 PM
White knuckles for sure Maureen, the way they weave in and out of traffic, great write. Tom
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Tom!! Rush hour could be a lot of fun ;) xomo!
Date: 9/12/2018 11:47:00 AM
A speedy haiku, Mo...I'm getting my tricycle out lol...enjoyed my friend...love & bikes...^WW^
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 1:28:00 PM
Trike on! I don't think I've biked since I retired, after a year, it was three wheels for me too! Cargo trike, front load door for the dogs ;) Rubber Side Down my friend! xomo <3
Date: 9/12/2018 11:16:00 AM
You are a lamp on a post, great haiku dear poet.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, you have me beaming. xomo!
Date: 9/12/2018 8:53:00 AM
Your so good at these haiku poems...You Rock Maureen!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Vickie! :)) xomo!
Date: 9/12/2018 7:41:00 AM
Lol.... Good one Mo Mo
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thank you SO! "white knuckle sweat spray" didn't make it into a poem months ago, it finally got one ;) xomo!
Date: 9/12/2018 7:38:00 AM
Yep, complete imagery, good stuff
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Lewis :) xomo!
Date: 9/12/2018 4:19:00 AM
An Excellent write, full of descriptive imagery for such a short poem. Well done.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you M.L.! xomo
Date: 9/12/2018 4:17:00 AM
I could never do it, no matter how much adrenaline drip it gave me. I had a horrible bike wreck on Feb 5th, 1984, so you can see why. Sweet haiku if you are not me.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 7:13:00 AM
Lol, gotcha, mine was Oct 4th '95, knocked my lights out for a week...but left me thirsty for it after, I couldn't wait to get back to it (took 8mos) addiction cemented/demented. I did it for 20yrs. Retired now, it's slow lane for me. Got a concussion in May which led me to figure out I've had Post-Concussion syndrome spanning from that wreck. ;) Thank you Caren xo, mo!
Date: 9/12/2018 2:09:00 AM
Well described!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Richard! :)) xomo!
Date: 9/12/2018 1:40:00 AM
Its a dangerous game!!!! Great haiku
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 9/12/2018 7:22:00 AM
Oh and so much fun! Even when it sucked (snow storms etc) the high from doing it was incomparable. I never broke anything at work, it was always the extra curricular... ;p Thank you Arthur! xomo