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Big Town Youngster's Dreams

So alone and pensive, he stares at the paved, glaring square below admiring an elegant lady strolling by... with a vibrant spirit in his blood, his enthusiasm will flow; what kind of reward will he have, if he doesn't try? Young man, have you done enough to get ahead in life? Oh, you desire a marriage and many kids; they will come through fortitude and sacrifice... put aside every useless fear and beat all the odds! Big town youngsters' dreams are awaiting release from a heart, which will see his dream realized... when triumph, fortune and glee will never cease; he stands at the balcony with a look so mesmerized! Entered in Iolanda Scripca's contest, " Untold Secrets "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2010 12:53:00 PM
very strong revealing write and I am admiring your strides in end rhyme! Light & Love
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Date: 5/3/2010 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Iolanda's "Untold Secrets" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:59:00 PM
Sounds like torn between two dreams. Good one and congratulations, Andrew!!
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserved win in my contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:07:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Iolanda's contest with this lovely Quatrain ..which is a perfect description of the photo presented.. enjoy your special honor...with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:23:00 AM
enjoyed reading today
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Book: Shattered Sighs