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Big Sister, Little Brother

Big Sister, Little Brother Big sister Little brother At play First day Of school She takes His hand Shows him The way From home Big sister Little brother Grows up Passes away He takes Her hand Shows her The way To home Dedicated to James C Kroll May 3, 1946 - Jan 28, 2016

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Date: 6/28/2018 5:24:00 PM
I can see this is very personal to you it is however a sweet lovely dedication and thank you for sharing it with us.
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 6/28/2018 6:29:00 PM
Thanks, Sylvia. Writing is a great release for all of us. It's nice to have your feelings validated. Thanks for your kindness. Kathy
Date: 3/20/2016 9:29:00 AM
Love this poem, Kathleen. A very potent message expressed in few words, the mark of a great poet.
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 3/20/2016 9:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Cona! He was a sweet and gentle soul. I miss him more than I ever thought...
Date: 3/7/2016 8:11:00 AM
Lovely but sad. Just continue to write what's in your heart. Don't worry about whether people like it or not, if you're happy with it then it's good! I too lost a son so I can identify with this one. Peace my dear:)
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:02:00 AM
Heartfelt poem ... Enjoyed the flow
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