Big Sister, Little Brother

Big Sister, 
Little Brother

Big sister
Little brother
At play
First day
Of school
She takes
His hand
Shows him
The way
From home

Big sister
Little brother
Grows up
Passes away
He takes
Her hand
Shows her
The way
To home


Dedicated to
James C Kroll
May 3, 1946 - Jan 28, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Coulstock Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 5:24 PM
I can see this is very personal to you it is however a sweet lovely dedication and thank you for sharing it with us.
Kroll Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Thanks, Sylvia. Writing is a great release for all of us. It's nice to have your feelings validated. Thanks for your kindness. Kathy
Adams Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Love this poem, Kathleen. A very potent message expressed in few words, the mark of a great poet.
Kroll Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Thanks so much, Cona! He was a sweet and gentle soul. I miss him more than I ever thought...
Turner Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Lovely but sad. Just continue to write what's in your heart. Don't worry about whether people like it or not, if you're happy with it then it's good! I too lost a son so I can identify with this one. Peace my dear:)
A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:02 AM
Heartfelt poem ... Enjoyed the flow
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